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Reviews for Just a Little Fooly Cooly

By : SailorPoison
  • From WunklerJay on January 14, 2011
    Spelling and Grammatical errors aside, you've written a Great story, both VERY Sensual and Satisfying to boot! :) Personally I Loved the part when Haruko asks Naota (his name, BTW) if he wants to come with her to find Atomsk after that meaningful lovemaking scene. Sweet, compelling and at times comedic, this was a tale worth reading to the point where I'd like to review the entire series again. If you ever need a proof-reader just let me know and I'll work at your side helping with the technical tasks (English, spelling, etc.). Know that I, as well as many others who read the works you pen, look forward to more of your vision.

    Jay
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  • From ANON - Andrew on December 18, 2005
    I liked it you should make one when Haroko and Naoto have a kid.

    Let me know what you think.
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  • From hanyouinu on October 19, 2005
    could of had a better sex scene but it also had a really outstanding storyline goodwork!
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  • From ANON - Brandon on October 04, 2005
    That was the best FLCL fic ive ever read! if you find more info on FLCL make a second chapter to this story
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2005
    Yaaaay for space travel! And smut!
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  • From on July 10, 2005
    Her name is haruhara haruko.
    His name is Naota.

    That bothered me the entire time, kehe.
    Otherwise, good fic.
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  • From ANON - Talia on December 25, 2004
    You may want to clean up your sentences. Some of them are hard to understand. But you have a very rock- n- rolly style of writing (speaking from a writers piont of view.)
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  • From ANON - Talia on December 25, 2004
    You may want to clean up your sentences. Some of them are hard to understand. But you have a very rock- n- rolly style of writing (speaking from a writers piont of view.)
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  • From ANON - goodstuff on August 26, 2004
    What do you mean the end? you should write more and when the find atamosk they should have a theesome. that is that unquestionable!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2004
    Quite a few spelling errors, but not too shabby!
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  • From ANON - Jes on May 04, 2004
    This was great! just a couple spelling mistakes like Naota, Vespa, and you mispelled haruko at times :3 but otherwise this was awesome :3
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  • From ANON - centralcontrol on May 03, 2004
    I think it was great, some lemons make you read for half an hour, but this one got to the point. just so you know, it's "Vespa Lady"
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  • From ANON - Kaijn on May 02, 2004
    hey you should wright more it has more plot then good porn and i like it
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  • From ANON - theMaven on March 19, 2004
    That was really good! Sometimes some of the phrasing was a little awkward, but the words were clear enough that I got the picture. Truly a pleasure to read ^__^
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  • From ANON - Condwiraelumure on March 18, 2004
    FAN-FREAKIN'-FIC-TASTIC! Let's see some adventures shall we?
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