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Reviews for Time To End The Nightmare

By : Archangel
  • From ANON - Macmac on December 16, 2005
    "...screamed for Faye's love..."

    Damn, that was a great line. What a powerful image.
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  • From ANON - BlueVixen2071 on June 09, 2004
    Wowz, very gewd! ^_^ It's sexy, yet not over the top! Gewd job! ^,~
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  • From on November 24, 2003
    Great Story Is the sequil gunna have Ed and Ein in it?
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  • From ANON - Kendra Luehr on November 18, 2003
    lol, I know I've already read this fic, but I just wanted 2 comment on how funny that whole thermal sunglasses thing wuz, hahha. =P naughty, naughty!!! =^-^ wel well, it's wut u ppl write best! lol ^,~
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  • From ANON - Kendra Luehr on November 18, 2003
    Well, I thought that that wuz very good! ^^ I'm SO glad that there's gonna b a sequel! lol...the luv wuz good, but my only complaint iz that the dialogue like "OH, YES!!!wutnwutnot made me not able 2 take it az seriously, lol. Other than that, gr8 job! ^,~
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  • From ANON - Kendra Luehr on November 17, 2003
    Aww! I like it already! ^^ I'm hooked on the very 1st chappie! Yay! lol, & I think that it's actually spelled "Gorgio", cuz I saw it in the subtitles, but aw, who carez? >.> lol, heh...sry -_-'
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  • From on November 13, 2003
    Keep up da good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2003
    vary cool vary vary cool but whos jet get as a girlfrinde
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  • From ANON - Shawn on June 24, 2003
    Wow.....that was such a good story. I wish I could write like that. My god that was a really good story. Where did you come up with the idea? I've been trying to write a Bebop fic for the longest and I keep getting writer's block. Your story flowed so easily and it was captivating. I can't wait to read some more of youe stories. I hope write some more Bebop fics.


    ;) Sesshoumaru_dono
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  • From ANON - Slam on May 28, 2003
    I wished that you would make the story longer. SEQUAL material.
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  • From ANON - mikochef21 on April 28, 2003
    That had to be one of the best Bebop fics I have ever read, (and I have read quite a few) I have always thought there should have been more to the story then "BANG". You did it with real class. Thank You Very Much ;)
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  • From ANON - Darkrose Muse on March 18, 2003
    For a spike/faye fic this was not too bad. Personally, I absolutely dispise any love interest fan fiction about Spike/Faye as lovers. I don't know I just have never enjoyed reading such drivel that is so predicable with plots you can run a mak truck through. But this one had a fairly good ending to it so I'll give it points on trying to be original. The story was okay in regards to plot. But it was a little unSpike-like. I can;t see him acting that way. But the way you wrote Jet was awesome! that was definately on the money.

    However I really liked the writing style! And the sex was very nicely done without getting to mushy or perverted. That was well done.

    I give this fic 3 out of 5 stars. With room for improvement. Please try to write a bebop story that is more plausible. There is no doubt that your writing style is very good. but please try to branch out away from the obvisous themes. The spike/faye theme has just been overdone.
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  • From ANON - Vegeta\'s angel on March 10, 2003
    that was the best ending I have ever read and it ended the same way it would have if it came on TV a JOB WELL DONE
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  • From ANON - Vegeta's angel on February 22, 2003
    another cliff hanger, lol well any way I really like this story keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - vegetasangel on February 12, 2003
    wow and that was a mean cliffhanger not fair not fair. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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