Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for For suddenly, I saw you there

By : BarbaraSheridan
  • From Kagetsukai on May 08, 2008
    Extremely well-written. Left a knot in my throat. Very well done!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2007
    Is it the format used here or something else, somehow the spelling in some areas got messed up a bit? It's a DAMN SHAME too, 'cause I know how great this story is and what an excellent writer you are but someone reading this for the first time might wonder and give it a lower rating. Hope to see more from you soon.
    Report Review

  • From teacupprincess14 on February 21, 2007
    for so many hits you have a pitiful amount of reviews! silly people! although, this is such a beautiful and heartbreaking story maybe people don't know what to say..

    anyways, it was very VERY good. I'll be hunting around for your other work.
    Report Review

  • From LucyMay on August 19, 2006
    Heartbreaking, but beautifully written. I loved this.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - wired on November 20, 2005
    how about a souji x tetsunosuke pairing? i know his a minor...but the pairing is kinda cute.........its like okita is tetsu's gude to life......his like a mature errr 'woman' with her calm but bubbly personality as oppose to young tetsu's fiery and loud self...why not think about it..sure its not yet popular but its something different...fresh........i mean a like the other pairngs don't get me wrong..but they're kinda boring now.....i've been reading fanfics for ages....i notice there isn't a variety anymore.........readers are very curious and sparks interestnwhen presented with unused..........unseen paring...ehehehe....i read one fanfcis of this pairing!it got me hook so i'm lookkng for more of this pairing...so if u'd like to send me ur opinion please email me at konoha_ninja3888@yahoo.com.au (no flames pls)......thanks! XD
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Analia on June 30, 2005
    Wow... *wipes away tears* You made me cry. *Bows deeply* Your story is very, very good, and I absolutely love it. There are only a few writers who can bring me to tears, and now you are one of them. That was so sad, but so sweet. Keep up the good work.

    --Analia
    Report Review

  • From ANON - misticfox on April 17, 2005
    awww, this was so sad!! but also happy because they are together now! i felt so bad when souji asked "Am I really so awful that you want to spare Tetsu-kun from becoming like me?" i just wanted to cry!!!!!

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady Caos on January 31, 2005
    YOU made me cry. That's so wonderful...the most beautiful and saddest story about HijikataxOkita I've read so far. Poor, poor guys T-T (cries again)
    Lok
    Report Review

  • From ANON - The_MarmaladeCat on July 28, 2004
    Oh dear...I almost did the sniffly thing with that one...:)

    That was a very touching and well-written story. I enjoyed the all the little details such as Hijikata cutting his hair, and the bandit that Okita killed, though of course I'm not sure if those are historical fact or your own creation.

    Sweet and tender, there's just so much tragedy in that whole period of history to write about. Still, you did a wonderful job of it.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nanael on July 16, 2004
    Wonderfull story!
    I love PMK! The part, in which Souji dies ist really sad...but in the end it's a Happy End so I wasn't to sad at all!
    For I'm only learnig english in school I'm not abel to say something about language or mistakes but the plot was really good!
    Nanael §^-^§
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kat on February 20, 2004
    Mmm something's missing.... yet at the same time it seemed so detailed, and it was so sad! Or... em.. well it was kinda happy at the ending, I still haven't decided. Eitherway, it was an awsome fic for my latest obsession. Thank you for such wanderful reading :) hope to see more (happier ones? T_T) in the future.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - dri on December 31, 2003
    wow that was incredibly sad and well written
    Report Review

  • From ANON - toxictattoo on December 29, 2003
    Wonderful. Simply wonderful. This fic has stolen my breath away. Rich and vivid are the images that you use. Incredible.
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!