Reviews for Asphyxiation

BY : Hoshiko

  • From ANON - Anjo on July 30, 2005

    I hear the cries of a sequel, and yet...none. Zilch. Nada. Nyet.

    But it doesn't matter, because this is so great! I I mean. WOW.

    Uhh, I'd say "keep up the good work" but...well. Sigh. It doesn't matter.

    It was kick-ass! And poor Sano...gah, the angst. Glrgh.

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  • From WhiteDog on January 26, 2004

    First,let me confes something:I'm not a RK fan.I've never seen a single episode or read a single manga.I accidentally bumped into a fansite and read an interesting description and saw many beautiful pictures of this pairing, so I decided to read a few stories,out of curiosity.

    And then I found this.

    I feel so pathetic writing this,because there's nothing I can say that you don't already know.You knew exactly what you were d whe when you wrote thisry,ary,and it shows more clearly than in any story of any fandom I've ever read.I can tell you nailed the characters perfectly.You're so talented you can even convince a total newbie you know what's happening.It's very impressive.

    Another thing was that I almost cried while reading this.That has never happened to me.I really love the POV,how you described the way Sano feels about Saitou,and the whole magical atmosphere of the story.Sad and angsty and full of unspoken things.You don't use dialogue to explain them,nor do you write them at all, but they are there loud and clear.I just love this so much and I can't thank you enough for writing this little gem.

    White Dog

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  • From ANON - Seth on January 05, 2004

    So many things... Enthralling, intense, amazingly written... This was absolutely great... It really seems like Sano is telling us this story... And I love how you kept the emotion level throughout the story, very nice. The song from Maroon5 was a wonderful choice for this story too... If perfect were real, then this is ditelitely a perfectly written story.


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  • From ANON - Malik\'s Girl on January 02, 2004

    Hey, luvd your story! ^_^

    And I think you portrayed Sano in the way he would really be... he's such a cutie!

    Why would Misao be dead?!?! O_O she's the only cool girl in this anime!!! ok, she's pretty bitchy sometimes, but still... ^_^

    Anyways, I liked your fic v. much, it's great!

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  • From ANON - Alison on December 27, 2003

    My god. That was the best Saitou/Sano story ever. I beg you to write a chapter 2....when they find each other again!!!!!

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