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Reviews for G to the X

By : solana
  • From ANON - Storyseeker on December 29, 2005
    Ack! I agree with the other reviews! Great story concept, horrible grammatical exectution. I hardly finished reading soley due to the spectacular lack of grammar. This is worth a rewrite though, so please work through the problems and bring it back!
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  • From ANON - EileenK98 on January 29, 2005
    You really, really need to use quotation marks. It's hard to tell when someone's speaking otherwise. Great concept, but the execution could use a little tweaking.
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  • From ANON - Angry Mom on January 12, 2004
    Well, as far as I can tell, you're writing an X-Men-G-Force Crossover. Nifty-cool, there aren't very many of those in the world. Unfortunately, your fic is seriously lacking of grammatical refinement. You need to go back and correct these things: the complete lack of quotation marks for the characters' dialogue, bad spelling, misplaced or missing punctuation, and paragraph breaks. I had a hell of a time reading this because the story's construction was frigged up so badly, it was hard to tell what exactly was going on. A creative writing course would do wonders for you. Go in peace and may the force be with you.
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