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Reviews for Picnic

By : ErieDragon
  • From ANON - ree on October 13, 2006
    nice story, but theres a lot of mistakes that you definitely need to fix.
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  • From ANON - rayvn on January 21, 2005
    While all in all its an ok story the problem comes with Akito.. Akito is a female. You can see that in the later chapters of the Manga.. Also Shigure is the one screwing Akito.. (of course there is the thing where i just dont like akito/tohru pairings but i thought id give you my advice)
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  • From ANON - LadyKagome on September 18, 2004
    I enjoyed it very much. I read ' Light in My life' I was very impressed. You write well.
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  • From ANON - ohimesama on January 21, 2004
    wow! finally someone wrote an akiru fic where it doesn't involve rape ^_^
    i really liked this one!
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  • From ANON - cynthia on January 20, 2004
    oh my god , I was so excited when you post this fic. I loved light of my life but I must admit it need more details.
    Picnic really gave more insight to tohur and akitos relationship.
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