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Reviews for Altered Threesome

By : Shuukitty
  • From PrismMoth on September 29, 2010
    Those fight scenes were just hot! And look what they led to. And it's so tasteful! Really like how this is written!
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  • From PrismMoth on September 29, 2010
    Loved the fight and development of the characters! And the spice was just right for to bring the chapter out. Had my attention from start to finish and my stomach in slight flutters. Will be back for more.
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  • From aquarianbabe on July 17, 2008
    *Squeeeee-loved it!!! This fic was well told...not one boring moment. I cared about what each of them was feeling and the language. Oh, it was just so good!!! The sex scenes were hotness...I'm just loving it. It's one of my favorite fics!!!
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  • From ANON - vanessa on July 26, 2006
    That is the best s-CRY-ed fic I've ever read, it's going to take me a while to go back to reading other pairings after this one, can you please write another threesome fic like this one, or you can write a sequel to this one, please?_? I'd greatly appreciate it if you did, and if you don't write it, it's fine by me. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Schweimer on July 15, 2006
    Wow! I love it! A lot of yaoi I've read just isn't well-written...and if it is, it just isn't very 'sexy'. But, this is both! Never while reading did I have to sit through poor writing or lemon-y scenes that just didn't hold my interest.

    The only qualm I have is when earlier, in the gym, when both Tachibana and Ryuhou used their Alters...it didn't really mention anything in the room bursting and altering to form their Alters. Later, you had the empty glass disappear for a single one of Tachibana's spheres, but before that, they just popped out of nowhere. It's not a big deal...it just sort of bothered me.

    Anyway, amazing fic! You two have talent!
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  • From ANON - ATG on January 01, 2006
    In all seriousness...

    ...

    This is the best damned s-CRY-ed fanfic I have ever read. You hear that? EVER. >< The sex, the relationships, the emotions --- the IMAGRY!

    You are the divine ruler of the s-CRY-ed section! Two thumbs up! Ten stars! An A+ grade! Took me three days to read this monster- I pulled late nights and early mornings! Hours at a time I was absorbed in your writing style.

    And I must give you bonus points on your excellent portrayal of Tachi. He's a tought guy. So many seem to portray him as weak and overly uke-ish. And Kazuma's emotions and feelings? Yeah. Perfect. I see him as emotional deep down. Give him someone he really cares about and he's practically a giant puppy (Think I can get away with rubbing his tummy? No? I thought so.). And on Ryuhou's characterization I'll have to admit he's a tough target to hit but you did it. You pinned his personality!

    So, in conclusion all I really have to say is...


    DAMN! You're good!

    ~ ATG
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  • From ANON - chrisi on December 29, 2005
    nooooooooo, u cant end it there, does tachi fix there bodies, wat are the scars...i need to know pls make a sequal or write more pls
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  • From ANON - annabellemanix on December 09, 2005
    wai!!!! this fic was SOOO ROCKIN!!!!! i loved it! specially chapters 11 and 12! ^_^ yosh...that was HAWT!! i must say is one of the BEST (and probably my newest favorite -_^) yaoi lemon scene ive ever read... i also liked how ryuhou and kazuma (slowly) came to realize how much they really cared about each other...and how even then, they still keep their bickering attitudes, which i TOTALLY think they would...ya know, like they didnt get all sappy with each other......damn this is the longest review ive written in awhile, but i just REALLY liked this fic!!! (-_^).v
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on October 21, 2005
    i loved this, this is the very first scryed with all my fav. characters actually IN character and it was well written. I couldnt ask for anything more...well except maybe another one. Anyhoo, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Eared (not signed in) on July 07, 2005
    That was my first fic of this series and given I don't know all that much about it but I really enjoyed your story. Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us here at aff.net.
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  • From RedHedLvr on February 11, 2005
    Wow! Fantastic story. I really liked how you portrayed Tachibana, more experienced than Ryuhou (pardon my spelling) but not as "wordly" as Kazuma! There was lots of steamy, sex too. We need to start a S-Cryed fanfic campaign, there just needs to be more fics written for this great anime. And you have contributed nicely to the cause. Hope to read more from you.
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  • From ANON - woww on September 03, 2004
    your story was absolutely amazing!!!!! you should've gotten SO much more credit for this!!! But i'm glad you wrote this ficc...i've just started watching this series and I've already come to realize that there aren't a lot of decent ficcs out there for it. I'm happy to say that yours is over expectation to me, and just all of it is really really great. And all those lemons scenes **gets all hott** fantastic, i felt like i was right there about to make love with them!! very hott and sexii ~_^ i've come to love all of your work and am now an official fan...plz continue writing, b/c like Kyo had said to Tohru that one time she got sick and stopped smiling, "...or else I won't be happy." ta ta for now hun!!! much love -Abby ~_^
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  • From Brightdreamer on April 23, 2004
    I still think there should have been another scene either at the end of ch. 18 or the beginning of ch. 19! I can't help but wonder what was said... or done... between Kazuma and Ryuhou when he went to the bedroom. Ryuhou was waiting up for him... what did he say? Or do? *wants more RyuKazu stuff, can't you tell?* ^_^

    You left this wide-open for a sequel, too. Any chance of that happening? And might you need another co-author/betareader? ^_^
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  • From on April 20, 2004
    I’ve read a lot of yaoi fan fiction but this is by far the best one I’ve ever read. I like the way that you give the story a point and purpose. It’s not just a PWP there’ substance to ‘Altered Threesome’ that you cant find in most yaoi fan fics. I love that through out the whole story you are able to keep each character in character. Though they have all evolved to fit this new situation, you can see that they are still the same people. Like no matter how comfortable Ryuho and Kazuma my get around one another they still seem to hate each other due to their pride. The chemistry between the three of them is wonderful and you just can’t stop reading once you’ve started.

    I can’t wait to read more and I think I definitely should have reviewed you story earlier. I registered at AFF just to write you a response because I though this story was so phenomenal!

    Keep Up the Creativity,
    Nova Elizabeth Beam

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  • From ANON - celeste on April 04, 2004
    You know a fic is good when you can't pick between the pairings in it even though your favorite pairing from the universe is already set... -_-;; I don't know whether I like Ryuhou (cute, awkward, uncertain) with Tachibana or Kazuma (straightforward, have-a-good-time, don't-hold-back goodness). Haha well, I guess, based on the title, that I won't have to pick between them in the long run, but right now I'm in a tizzy! update soon! ^_^
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