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Reviews for Altered Threesome

By : Shuukitty
  • From Brightdreamer on March 25, 2004
    Just a quick note: you seemed to leave the "//'s" out of the thoughts in chapter 7. It made it a little hard to distinguish them.

    Otherwise, still enjoying re-reading this!
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  • From ANON - celeste on March 23, 2004
    Man, what a heartbreaker of a chapter! But still, very true to Ryuhou's character... I can't wait to see more of this! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shuukitty on March 17, 2004
    Thought I'd just drop a quick line, since a few have been asking about this.

    There will be a threesome, I promise! It'll just take a while. This part of the story is before Kazuma becomes known to HOLY. In a few more chapters, the story will skip ahead to post-series, and then the big red will show up. Thanks for commenting and being patient!

    >^.^
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  • From ANON - happytoxin on March 17, 2004
    Every chapter is better then the last.. and that's no small accomplishment! The characters are potrayed so well so far.. just love it.
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  • From ANON - 0 on March 16, 2004
    Where's the Threesome!!! Not that I'm complaining about what you have so far ^_^ Just wanna see some Kazuya action. Antway, awaiting update.
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  • From ANON - celeste on March 10, 2004
    Oh geez, that was great! I really, really really really really reallllllllllly want an update!!! You don't see a lot of good Scryed fics out there, and this one is absolutely delicious in a way that's true to the characters. Keep it up please!
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  • From ANON - toxin on February 10, 2004
    I love this fic so much already! It's really well written and absolutely addicting. I hope that you continue with it!
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  • From Brightdreamer on February 09, 2004
    Woohoo! You posted the next chapter! I'm gonna have fun re-reading this.

    To the bedroom we go, woo! XD

    And a little comment, if you feel like revising this later: you might want to cut down on the elipses a bit. I know people do think and talk with pauses, but sometimes it's a little too much to be used in all dialogue and thoughts, y'know? It's a problem I have myself, in my own fics, and my betareader commented on it. So now I notice it with everyone else's fics too! XD
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  • From Brightdreamer on January 31, 2004
    Woohoo! Glad you got the first chapter up. I'll enjoy re-reading this! ^__^ Still one of my favorite s-CRY-ed fics ever.
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