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Reviews for Falling Like This

By : TLC
  • From on December 12, 2005
    NO!!!!!!!!!! MUST HAVE MORE! MUTS-HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have a bit of a grammer problem, but that realy dosen't matter when it comes to wrighting fanfics much, as long as people can understand it.
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  • From ANON - darning_needle on October 20, 2005
    XD, the very first Cyborg 009 fic I've ever read and I love it!! You must continue!! Plz??? I also like the way you have good grammar and all that stuff. It makes the fic that much more enjoyable. X3 Write more soon!!
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  • From ANON - TLC on July 28, 2005
    Well, Vladimir if you think I can do better, I'm open to sugeustions. Don't be scared to put a few ideas on the board if you're not satisfied with my story. neko_tlc@yahoo.com is my email addy, talk to me if you want. I think chapter two needs a revision anyway!
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  • From ANON - Vladimir on July 16, 2005
    Although it was a nice touch using the end of volume 10 as a starting point... the writing itself is shopworn and hackneyed. And the tenses switched up a little in that last chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dustin on August 24, 2004
    Very well written, and cute, I can't wait to see more it's very very good you get a gold star... two more gold stars and you can get a cookie.
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  • From ANON - Riyoko on June 05, 2004
    What happens? You must finish this story it is getting good I mean real good. I am loving it!!You must update hurry!!!!Please!!!!!* puppy eyes* Heh jk take your time. But you must hurry!!!:P
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  • From ANON - Kasota on May 05, 2004
    I've always supported Jet and Joe...So opposite yet so right ^^. I hope you update soon, this has been a good read ^^.
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  • From ANON - Kikichi on April 04, 2004
    Not bad at all hehehee..

    ya sould right more ya know
    hope002 gets to tell009 his feelin fer him.
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  • From ANON - Miss Rain on March 18, 2004
    This fic could be a pretty nice one - if you work in the characterization. Jet, Joe and Francoise... *facepalm*

    Jet's not prone to angst. He takes no crap and is very straightforward. If he likes you, he'll tell you. Most likely will search for the time, but he WILL.

    Joe is not a wuss. He's quite mentally strong for a boy whose world has been shaken once and again. And I doubt he'd go in tears so easily. I just remember him crying once or twice in the whole series.

    Francoise is not clingy. She's actually quite a selfless girl and quite reserved about herself. She'd never cling to Joe like a ditzy girl. She'd never act like a highschool bitch in the making.

    Please take those facts in consideration. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - LadyMoon on March 07, 2004
    The next chap, I want the next chap, I demand the next chap...*cough, cough* sorry I got a little carried away there. If you could not tell I really, really, REALLY, liked your fic. Pleassssseeeee up date soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - Vladimir on March 07, 2004
    A good start, although a few spelling errors... and mentioning "suicide mission" twice in two paragraphs is overkill... still, can't wait for the next chapter. And I promise I won't be reading it solely for the money shot.
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