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Reviews for A light in the sky

By : FrostofEgarath
  • From ANON - Lily of the Valley on August 10, 2004
    ooooooohhhhhhhh, I luv your fic. Claus is so sweet with poor Dio ^^. Last Exile is one of my fav anime and I was so happy to see that there was two yaoi fic of this ^^. It's not much, but it's that! Lol, I didn't know there was many person who liked Last EXile (My fav's alex ^^), but ehh, there you are!!!!!!! Lol, all that to say that I loved your fic and Dio who come back from is state by saying Immelman was so cool ^^. Argh I love you! MAke some more!!!!!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Yamistar on July 03, 2004
    Oh! This is so good! I love it! Please tell me that you're updating still. Because I want another update! Plese finish the story! ~Yamistar
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  • From ANON - WingedCougar on June 28, 2004
    Holy crap this was amazing! O_O Your writing is spectacular! It's really hard to find good Claus/Dio fics, so this was very refreshing :D Wow, I really cant say much besides this is great. Just great.
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  • From ANON - Ambrose Underwood on June 26, 2004
    While I liked this story well enough, some of the typoes and errors that proof-reading and a grammar-check would solve quickly got to be annoying. Also, even though I appreciate a few Japanese words and phrases in my fanfiction, it's really only appropriate in fandoms where the setting is Japan. However, now that the thorns are done with, this is a pretty good fic with a well-written tone and a smooth transition. Thanks for sharing it with LE fans.
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  • From ANON - Crystal on June 17, 2004
    So after the big kiss what's going to happen now? they going to run away into the Rain? you know escape that palce? or is someone going to walk in
    on them? you'll tell us! pleas do! they are not locked that tiny little room are they? What if one of his freinds come and looks fore him? well they find them
    like that?~...
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  • From ANON - Eva on June 02, 2004
    Not bad so far. :3 You've got some very nice description, the imagery in certain parts is quite vivid. My one complaint... Using terms like "glomp" and "bishie," which are pretty much exclusive to the fangirl vocabulary, have a way of shattering the mood that you do such a good job of creating. They're not in context, so it's distracting.

    Oh - but you get bonus points for the pairing! X3 It's a royal pain finding any Dio/Claus yaoi, despite what an entirely obvious and plausible pairing it is.
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  • From ANON - Starlight03 on May 18, 2004
    How fair well they go? with out eather of them being torn apart from eachother? who well save who now? and who well try and brake them apart?
    Let us hope they don't trust wro wrong people who they well tell about there emotions to. is there going to be some evil ware love one was?.
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  • From ANON - Sharon on May 15, 2004
    They kissed? there 1st one right? so what going down in the next one someome might walk in on them...I hope not and dosen't he have to return to...
    The air ship pritty soon? before it get too dark out side. and maybe the rain might stop.
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  • From ANON - Rika on April 29, 2004
    Well geting closer by every kiss right? I hope non of them don't pass out from the emotional kiss one qustion are they and couple now?
    And yes I saw the hints I wonder how eveone going to take it win they find out about them? good bad?
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  • From ANON - Krisse on April 24, 2004
    Well the last time I saw LE is win Claus and Tatiana get lost in the desret togher and sort of and Bond is from like and brother and sister one...since
    Tatiana care more about *Alistar* more then anything if you saw the hints you know I'm talking about Alison. but yeah they are geting closer to and couple.
    if you can make them into and couple that would be fine.
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  • From ANON - Nikki on April 22, 2004
    I am glad to see that this was finally updated, please don't wait so long next time! A little criticism (constructive I hope) there were numerous spelling errors, I don't recall there being any in the first two chappies, so either it was a rushed post or something, but I would be happy to proof read for you if you'd like, ChefGirlNikki@Aol. I have only seen what was on TechTV of this series so far, and any more isn't out on disk yet, so it may not be right to say this, but it seemed to me a touch OOC for Claus, but I can dwithwith that, and since I know there is more I haven't seen, I could be really off base. Appologies if I am. Keep up the story though!
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  • From ANON - Lilia on April 21, 2004
    Cute...kind of sad kind of serious.
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  • From ANON - Hikari on April 21, 2004
    Cute! so you really made them kiss and Dio all thinks it and dream I wonder if he'll fall asleep after the kiss that would be normal to see if he did...
    One Kiss can take away the pain na? someone onced sad. but I wonder what kind of nightmear was it? really evil? like lossing and love one?
    I know Dreams are Dream...but they can help people out with emotions lucky they are not locked in the room are they that would be bad...
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  • From ANON - Hikari on April 21, 2004
    Cute! so you really made them kiss and Dio all thinks it and dream I wonder if he'll fall asleep after the kiss that would be normal to see if he did...
    One Kiss can take away the pain na? someone onced sad. but I wonder what kind of nightmear was it? really evil? like lossing and love one?
    I know Dreams are Dream...but they can help people out with emotions lucky they are not locked in the room are they that would be bad...
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  • From ANON - Selene on April 18, 2004
    Well I just found out that they are going to have it out on dvd...the final one going to be out on...6/8/2004, yep that what it says...
    the Final Ep of LE maybe they hold the clue on why they taken it off but you did and good job on it! they kissed! so cute!
    But it would be bad if someone walks in on them if they go too fair...but I don't they are *That* Fair yet right? but geting there.
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