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Reviews for "Let me be the one"

By : ladyune
  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 09, 2005
    baby--you should let me love you,
    let me be the one to,
    ...um
    compliment you on how good you wrote this fic
    ...and be a bit of a joker. but that doesn't mean i'm kidding about how good i feel this story is.
    you go, girl!
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  • From ANON - Lady Mystique X on June 10, 2004
    Oh... it was incredible! You have some spelling mistakes but I enjoyed this fic so much! You bettee get those fingers on the keyboard and continue thi story!!! I want more!! alright alright, sorry for the childish outburts ^-^ I loved your story and how Joe dealt with Francoise losing her virginity. It was so tender! All men should lea Lad
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  • From ANON - Mystical X on June 10, 2004
    Oh... it was incredible! You have some spelling mistakes but I enjoyed this fic so much! You bettee get those fingers on the keyboard and continue thi story!!! I want more!! alright alright, sorry for the childish outburts ^-^ I loved your story and Joe Joe dealt with Francoise losing her virginity. It was so tender! All men should learn!!
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha Jr. on May 26, 2004
    good story hurry and add chapters 002 is the guy with the orange hair right? i keep forgeting which is which besides 003 009 and 001 because they cut it off air, DAMN PEOPLE!!!! well finish!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2004
    MORE and one more thing? Wasn't 001 in the room too? Or was it my skimming? bAh! GOOD ANYWAYS!
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  • From ANON - Ryan on April 14, 2004
    Lovely fic.
    Needs some proofreading and touching up as it were, (Commonly known as betaing) but the story itself is wonderful.
    What the heck is 002's problem? If he had feelings for 003 then he should've spoken up about them a long time ago. 009 is better for 003 anyway.
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