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Reviews for Cruel Paradise

By : twistedgirl
  • From ANON - dianas30 on October 24, 2006
    Oh, this story is so good and I'm happy you got a chance for an update. Is's like a box of dinner mints one just isn't enough. Like I posted before thanks for the update and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - dianas30 on August 29, 2006
    Oh my god! I love this already! I started laughing when I realized how busted Takaya was ;and I just new Naoi was going to have a shit fit when he found out. Keep up the good work. Your writing is great!
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on July 18, 2006
    i love the story and you did a good job on now i am wiat ing for more chapter ont the story and is if naz kill yurri and his lord found him.
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  • From ANON - SohmaNina_san on July 16, 2006
    are you going to continue the fic ?.....i'm always checking....if it's updated.......i really love the story....and i hope to raed more of it......soon......nina
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  • From ANON - Uesugi on June 12, 2006
    Your story sucked. There wasn't anything in it that didn't suck. The characters were out of character, and the only people who could enjoy this story are loser schoolgirls who don't care about the actual plot of the story as much as they do the romance between two characters- oh and drama. Enough to drown in. Drama doesn't make a story good, and the only reason the angst in the actual Mirage of Blaze series worked was because it was well-balanced and interesting. I don't go for stories where the loser best friend makes out with the main character to make the main guy jealous. Talk about lame. To be fair, I only read the first two chapters, maybe it gets better after that, and I'll review if I decide to skip ahead and read into it later, and if it doesn't still suck, I'll appologize. The first two chapters weren't interesting though, sorry. Get some tallent.
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  • From ANON - ZC on February 09, 2006
    Is the story still be in process?? pls update soon.
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  • From ANON - Pacifica on January 11, 2006
    i like please you continu?e want to know the continuation your
    fic is great I like much and especially I will like that takaya says
    has nao?out love qu it has for him bus nao?oute say me that you go
    continue and that nobody will mourrir especially not naoé and takaya!!!
    answer me if it like to you!!
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on October 25, 2005
    Please, please, please keep going and update soon!!!!! This is such a good fic and I wanna know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - W.A. on September 22, 2005
    Wow this story is fantastic. I love it. The characters are well protrayed and the story is fantastic. Such a great fic. Please update soon, I am dying to know what will occur next
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  • From ANON - yvy on September 13, 2005
    I love your story! Don´t let us wait too long for the next chapter! PLEEEEEAAAAAASE!
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  • From ANON - DirenGreyOtepLuvr on August 24, 2005
    hey, i reviewed this one on mediaminer too, but under a diff name. it's so good i just had to review it here. there are so few mirage of blaze fanfics out there (that don't have to be translated from japanese) and this one has to be the best! i love your style and i love your plot. first fic or no, you'll only get better as time wears on and i'm looking forward to anything else you may post.
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  • From ANON - Ayuku on August 09, 2005
    It´s the best fanfiction I ever read! Please, write the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Juna on July 23, 2005
    Oh you must update! I just read all nine chapters in one sitting and I love it! please update this feels like it is missing eps from the anime. Man i wish something did happen like this. T_T I wanted to at least see them kiss passionatly! Anyways great job, the characters are just like in themselves. So cool. You have a great story here!
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  • From ANON - Ri on July 22, 2005
    OMG! Wow! You need to update soon! I am in love with this story and it so feels like a part of the series, even though those sexy lemon scenes never did happen. *Curses* Anyways please update soon you are doing such a lovely job here. Brvo!
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  • From ANON - tangerine on July 12, 2005
    Kyaaa!!! I've just read everything at one go and I really really really love your fic!!!!!!!
    There's a nice plot going on, YuzuruTakayaNaoe just draws me in.
    And the best thing about it is that TakayaxNaoe are not OOC. It goes very well with the actual story!
    The obsession and passion was put across very well too.
    Please please please update soon!!! I hope Takaya will arrive in time. I'll cry if Naoe gets hurt badly.
    Btw, where's Haruie? ^^

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