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Reviews for On Love and Lust - And Their Resultant Disasters

By : Vampyress
  • From ANON - Saakisu on August 23, 2005
    Amazing x_x it's written so well and i really enjoyed reading it. Thanks ^_^ that made my day XD I hope you keep up the good stuff.
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  • From ANON - RedHedLvr on August 10, 2005
    This is the best written, HOTTEST fic I've read in a long time. WOW. I mean, I'm typing in CAPS here so you just have to know its GREAT! Woof! *fans self furiously* I liked the rather old-fashioned style intro to each chapter cause they were witty and funny and I just loved the whole thing.

    Hope you write more for these two soon. There just aren't enough stories out there for these guys and you really have them down to a T.

    Thanks for a fantastic fic.
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  • From ANON - Nakuo Shiatsu on August 03, 2005
    Wow... I loved it... Write another one... Please...?
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  • From BlackberryPatch on July 23, 2005
    This story is just... wow. Very nice. I applaud your skills. Your imagery is magnificent and your characterization lovely. I think the Eclipse in the bath scene has to be one of my most favorite things that I've ever read. This story gets better every time I read it, especially now that you've fixed it up. Thanks for sharing. =]
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  • From ANON - tsuki on July 20, 2005
    i.... ....... ......i..... .....i.... cant believe you would think of such a thing.....i cant believe you didnt continue it.....its maskes me sad.. i want more....0.0 please?

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  • From ANON - Lilly on July 17, 2005
    Wow. 0_0..... *Blinks a bit*

    Your writing style is so clever and intelligent! I loved it! It was a lot of fun to read! ^_^
    (And by clever and intelligent I mean OMG that was flippin' HAWT! I want to steal your noggin and burrow inside it like a little Yaoi obsessed squirrel.)

    Cuz... that's not crazy or anything. lol.

    -Lilly
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  • From ANON - Starwarrior on July 02, 2005
    Dude.... that was deep lol! That's all I can say. It was deep
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  • From ANON - Leah on June 23, 2005
    OMG, that was SO freaking hot. TT^TT Wow.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2005
    The second chapter was a little iffy, but this was overall a great series! Well done!

    Perhaps a bit of editing to fix typos and programming errors (saw a lot of unfinished hypertext drifting between words), or maybe that's just this site? :)

    Once again, very well done. Quite possibly the longest drawn-out lemon I've read.

    ^__^
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  • From ANON - Lee on April 16, 2005
    Yaowzah! Steamy! I read your bio, and definitly suggest the submission of something original. Good Luck.
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  • From ANON - Kiche on March 18, 2005
    *flails and dies* That waas ...impossible. X3 Thats the greatest smut fic I've ever read. *worships you* it is concievable that I might need a change of panties after reading that. I don't think I could leave a comment that could say how great that fic was.
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  • From Elsewhere on March 08, 2005
    This is a fantastic story. The writing itself is excellent, both characters are thoroughly in-character, which is always refreshing, and...well, sensuous couldn't begin to describe this story. ^_~

    However, there's one thing that detracts from the experience, and that's the number of distracting and annoying typos throughout the story (particularly in the second chapter). As an example, this line, towards the end of the story:

    "He sed ted the slender body beneath him, clutching the boy’s hips tide ide deeper inside him"

    That's totally unintelligible. ^^; And like I said, it's really distracting, and keeps the reader from being able to sink into the narrative. The story could use a revision to clear out these simple mistakes, and then it would be utterly perfect.

    Thanks for a very pleasant read! ^_^
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on February 28, 2005
    Oh my!!! This is hot! I've read it so many times, and i never get bored.
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  • From ANON - Carisa on January 21, 2005
    Gods, that was hot. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Icy.Lexi on January 02, 2005
    Okay, so I'm falling madly in love with you. So what? Just leave me alone!

    *Runs off to build a shrine in your honor under my bathroom sink.

    Your newest stalker~
    Lexi
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