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Reviews for Sagara's Deflowering

By : Lexie
  • From satomika on September 08, 2014
    I was hoping there was more to Sousuke and Kaname's coupling~

    And hmmm~

    I think I'd prefer Kurz to be the one spying/eavesdropping on them~

    Because U think it's funnier that way~
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on March 11, 2010
    I really do love everything that you write. I love this line 'He'd always thought her to be the perfect blend of killer body and killer soldier, a combination that turned him on like nothing else.' and the line where he didn't think he'd be kissing her ass for real was soooo sexy.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on September 02, 2008
    This was very much fun to read, and I loved the 4th chapter. So nice to see some of the peanut gallery getting some luving too.
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  • From Jesphoenix05 on June 17, 2007
    How much fun is this!? Please I hope you continue soon!
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  • From Perpetual159 on May 11, 2007
    HA! That was great! Sousuke and Kaname were great, but Mao and Weber were awesome... very sexy!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 01, 2007
    very, very hot! wow!!! poor Sousuke, having to deal with Chidori's pranks. LOL. well...i'm sure it was worth it in the end. very well written, loved the addition of mel and Kurtz (i love Kurtz). great take on Sousuke's innocence as well. very, very well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Arashijo on January 02, 2007
    now that was a hot fic! kudos! i love kaname and sousuke! great mao and kurz add on too!
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  • From sakurastar on September 25, 2006
    WOW! This story was the hottness!
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  • From ANON - kogaswind on September 16, 2006
    OMFG i love this story, not to mention ure writing is fantastic!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Virga on January 17, 2006
    Wow... that was hot.
    Mmm.
    Being bisexual, I love both of them. Yummy.
    I'm not generally too fond of the Melissa/Kurz pairing, either, but you did a great job with that. Again, yummy. ^_^

    However... I don't know if it's just my browser, but there are a few areas (mostly in chapter three) where the text gets kind of jumbled together. It's strange. I think you should take a look at it, because it's kind of a mood killer--even if it's not meant to be there.

    Another thing I want to say: You did a great job at portraying Kaname, and obviously she'd be the agressor/initiator of it. But she's not a whore. I'd like to think she hasn't lost her virginity yet. Though she is an agressive character, in the end she's still a pure and innocent hero, right along with Sousuke.
    Plus, she's still what--sixteen? That's not impossible.

    But it's better than I would have done. Great job! ^_^
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  • From Jimaine on December 24, 2005
    wow that was pretty good! Sosuke is soo cute! But i loved it when Mel was like he should have known better lol. That was great. And the addition of Kurtz and Mel was awsome! You should definitly do an interigation scean. That would be awsome! Much love to you for this story and indeed cookies!
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  • From ANON - h to the iso on December 18, 2005
    give more kurtz plus melissa! hot sex hot sex hot sex hot sex hot sex hot sex !!!! kurtz plus mellsia!
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  • From ANON - Truth44 (not logged in) on November 28, 2005
    This was too awesome for words. The lack of Kaname/Sousuke fics on this site is appalling, and this hit the spot. I loved how Kaname was treating Sousuke! But TMelissa and Kurz' situation was the best. IT was totally erotic. I loved it.

    Good work!
    Truth
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  • From ANON - DaisenseiBen on November 21, 2005
    One minor critique: Mao is a Sergent Major, not a full Major. There is a difference!

    Other than that, the story was just fine.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on August 18, 2005
    loved.it. Both couples were SO sexy. great job!!!
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