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Reviews for Sagara's Deflowering

By : Lexie
  • From ANON - warpwizard on July 24, 2005
    Really good, I liked all 4 chapters.
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on July 24, 2005
    Wow, I'm so happy that my first fan fic for Full Metal Panic didn't disappoint me. Good Job!^^
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  • From on July 02, 2005
    TYhis is the hottest story I ever read please write more. Can't wait. Also Anon can't you be more critizizy you should marry simone frome american idol!!! Love the storry. Add a chapter with tessa, kaname and sosuke. That's hot
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  • From on July 02, 2005
    2 thumbs up. I liked it alot. It's awsome that some one will finall let sosuke know he wants kaname. You rule.
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  • From ANON - Blue on May 18, 2005
    That was awesome! The best Sousuke and Kaname lemon i've ever read. Well, it's the only one i've ever read... Ithink you should write more. Sousuke and Kaname please!
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  • From ANON - Nis-chan on March 21, 2005
    oh so hot. I love this pairing!
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  • From ANON - wowow on January 18, 2005
    update soon, i say!!! good story! ;)
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  • From ANON - Cher on December 24, 2004
    Hi nice story you got there. keep it on!
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  • From ANON - Yamisui on October 23, 2004
    wow! i was going to write a "defloration" lemon between those two, but then i found yours and it was like someone had already read my mind! i love the series too, and this was DEFINITELY the way i'd picture a love scene between kaname and sousuke. (sousuke's so cute!) anyway, hats off to your ability to keep them in character---that's what makes a lemon stand out. i wouldn't have thought to include the twist at the end and the surprise lemon between kurz and mao, but i thoroughly enjoyed it, and now i'm dying to know what sort of situation you said one of your readers suggested.
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  • From ANON - Me on September 18, 2004
    If you know af an intresting situation do it! this is a good story!
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  • From elffromspace on September 06, 2004
    Nice lemon! Particularly the Sousuke torture. Also glad to see Melissa and Kurtz get some. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Jasmin on August 29, 2004
    ALL RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kale on August 27, 2004
    Wonderful, i liked it, and personally i think that was very in character for all of the to tell you the truth. Would love to see what your twisted lil mind can bring up next ^.~
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  • From Lexie on August 23, 2004
    Hey Anon, thanks for your comments--I really appreciate them! Obviously I'm not as well-informed of these details as you! It's always good to learn :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2004
    M/K! Thank you!
    Initial response: ROFL! Nice! :D
    Just some things I wanna mention:
    There're some inconsistencies with the names--Kurz usually calls her 'Sis,' not by her first name, and calling her 'Major' would be inappropriate, as her rank is really a sergeant. I think they usually put the adjective after the noun in military rankings, eg 'Sergeant 1st Class.'
    They were mostly in character, which I liked a lot. XD Nearly the entire chapter was funny! XD Judging from everything, I'd say you're a very good writer. Thanks for the M/K lemon! ^o^
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