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Reviews for Captain\'s Orders

By : Lexie
  • From saiyanprince1 on July 19, 2007
    wow way to go with this fic... any chance you would write one with melisa?
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  • From ANON - ^_^ on December 07, 2006
    O.O *nosebleeds* Ok... that was fuckin' HOT!!!! MORE, like the dinner and dessert scene >=D
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  • From ANON - RavenBeauty on November 10, 2005
    ::just stares at the screen:: umm..... ::takes a deep breath:: THAT WAS FUCKING AWSOME lol that just got me hot.... and I can't get any ::sobs:: I REALLY REALLY loved it.... I dont really like that girl.... (dont know why shes really cute though) but now I really like her.... this was awsome..... GREAT WRITER I wish I could write sex stories like you
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  • From ANON - Some randon girl on August 29, 2005
    i can only say keep going with this or write more Sosuke/Tessa(they are my favs) you write perfectly keep going like that.
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  • From ANON - jdudecrazy13 on August 29, 2005
    That was a great story, a really good read and very detailed. I give it two thumbs up ^^
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  • From wickedinkfaery on August 25, 2005
    Oh my! That is so dang hot! I love it...keep it up. I am huge fan of Sousuke and Tessa.
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  • From ANON - DarkFeenix on August 12, 2005
    Got to say, I was positively surprised by this fic. It started out fine, the characters were pretty IC and basic plot somewhat plausible(though, I still can't imagine Tessa cooking something... she doesn't seem like the person to do that.). I can't remember seeing/hearing sousuke ever calling Tessa "madame captain". Maybe it's bit more proper, but it was always taisa(captain) in the anime. I also think that it would be pretty OOC for sousuke to "trying not to stare at the sweet curves of her ass", when he doesn't even think anything about kisses(or know what they are). Also, you made the "love" sound lot like a quick crush, which I too think was bit OOC(especially after what Tessa said after the behemont thingy.. or whatever that big red robot was). Also you just made them jump into sex after few kisses right in Tessa's office. And they knew surprisingly much about sex overall, but lemon without that wouldn't make much sense.

    Anyway, good fic, write more, liked it, and it reminded me a lot of Random1377's fmp fic.
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  • From ANON - Suki on June 20, 2005
    Now here's a pairing you don't find often! ^_^ My preferred and favourite actually. You write very good lemons! Keep at em!
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  • From Mic123 on June 18, 2005
    LOL Soske always a military mind lol, but to the point this wasvery good, write a sequil or another chapter to this. I mean this could turn into many chapters if done right.
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  • From ANON - Arielx on June 11, 2005
    lmao when i read "pressing her pelvis harder against him." i thought pelvis was penis iwa s like wtf? lol u r a god writer lol keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Hey, I\'m Blue Too! on May 24, 2005
    Yeah, I totally agree with what Gord is talking about. You HAVE to make it Sousuke/FMP girls... I'm begging you! Please? Or at least Sousuke/Ren. LOL!

    G2G,
    Hey, I'm Blue Too!
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  • From ANON - blue on April 10, 2005
    this is a pretty good story. tastefully done and actually believable with the given characters. i could totally imagine tessa being upfront about her feelings to sousuke than kaname any day. lately i've been favoring tessa/sagara pairings, especially since it seems in the anime that sagara appears to be a bit more physically attracted to tessa than to kaname. hope to read more from you
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  • From ANON - Zelix on January 18, 2005
    Thanks for re-posting this, it was VERY good!
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  • From ANON - guest on September 14, 2004
    GRRR!!! Now I want this turned into a series! I feel so deprived!
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  • From ANON - Gord on July 04, 2004
    It's good to see some of my comments inspire people to write porn. *f* If* It almost brings a tear to my eye to inspire such work.

    This story was pretty damn hot aswell. I think you handled the characters quite well and never took them too far out of OOC.

    Hell, this could almost become a Sousuke vs FMP's females series, Sousuke/Ren, Sousuke/Melissa, Sousuke/Kyoko even Sousuke/Crazy Cop from Fumoffu. Ahhhh.... at least we can dream :P

    Anyway, thanks for the high quality porn once again :D
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