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Reviews for From Dreams To Reality

By : Megamisama
  • From animejunkie2006 on June 05, 2007
    I enjoyed reading the story. The characters in this seem very close to the actual characters in the manga. The only thing I would advise is to read and edit your story. It seemed like while writing you got really into what you were writing and then didn't go back and edit. Because of this there are a lot of misspellings and editing problems that distract from the action you wanted to convey. These words wouldn't be picked up on spell check because they are different words, such as salvia for saliva and fiction for friction. Other than that I was having a lot of fun with your story. I was saddened that they didn't have any smut in the manga and was thrilled to read that you continued where the manga stopped short.
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  • From ANON - otaku_lady on January 06, 2007
    I actually liked your lemon. It's one fo the better ones i've read. Very sappy, but hey, not all of us are into bondage (I am...) and seriously though, who wouldn't enjoy the sight of a naked Raenef falling into your bed?
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  • From ANON - Kasurii on November 27, 2006
    Yes, um...MUST I rant endlessly about how addicted I am to your writing style, not to mention the pure bliss of your lemon? I, like, needed a drool sponge. Yes, a drool sponge. Not rag, sponge. Rag just...wouldn't cut it, frankly.
    Write more. Or... I dunno. I'll...blow up your computer. >>; I'm a little brain dead after that, ok? Give me a break.
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  • From ANON - Storm on November 20, 2005
    Very cute. Actually I was totally convinced that the actual manga was going to go in this direction. But alas in the end it didn't. Anyway, I liked it, Great Job!
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  • From ANON - Neko-chan on July 01, 2005
    DONT YOU DARE! How can you do this to us? :( Give us a good story and then threaten to never write one as good as this ever again? you're so mean!! please write more!
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  • From ANON - setosgirl (not signed in) on June 17, 2005
    Your lemon didn't suck.^^ Well, it did, but in the best possible way.... XD feel specail - I chose your story to be the first DD story I read, and I enjoyed it very much. Mmm... sexy demon bishies...
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  • From ANON - mizukimarr910 on May 16, 2005
    oh my god that was great but why;d he have to fall asleep before eclipse told him that he loved him? that was my only qualm. please keep writing and update again soon.

    thanx mizukimarr910
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  • From ANON - KimiKumiko on April 04, 2005
    It was a nice story you got going there. Though it would be better if it didn't have the mistakes. Maybe you should get a beta, it never hurts to have someone check over your work. And it be nicer without the mistakes. All in all it was a lovely story. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Lantom Phinker on March 15, 2005
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  • From ANON - Ouch on March 14, 2005
    Please tell me you're a virgin. Because that was one of the most unrealistic sex acts I've ever read. Doing any of that would cause tearing. They wouldn't need lube, there would be more than enough blood. Ick.
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  • From ANON - LilBunnyRazorBlades on February 15, 2005
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake (Not lgd in) on December 14, 2004
    Ooo!!! Finaly! A dream sequecnce that wasn't a dream!!! I Lvd it! Pls write more!!!
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  • From ANON - brandi on August 06, 2004
    this is one of the best lemons I ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SesshoumarusMistress on July 15, 2004
    well it was a good story... but i am miffed at you. You stole my story title, next time search your title through the sight to see if any others already have it before claiming it. otherwise i liked the story.
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