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Reviews for Shades of Gray

By : YoakeRyuu
  • From wolfkin59 on May 04, 2010
    Well, I like it. I'd like to see it continue, see how their relationship works out.
    And, by the way, the spell check was giving you crap because it's supposed to say predatory or predatorily. And there are a few errors, mostly towards the end.
    But I WOULD like to know... How is Sabel supposed to get over his "childish" side when Fedelta spoiled him by visiting every day, and how would Shydeman react to being dumped by Fedelta? *hamster wheels spin*
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  • From ANON - wolfkiss on January 22, 2006
    Ohhh! you should write more I really liked it. It was sad ending but still really good. Go on and write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2005
    Uh, I actually think it doesn't need to be continued, I think it's great the way it is. Angst, Angst! haha. Good Job.
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  • From ANON - Naiya Nadeshiko on September 17, 2004
    i agree with ma twin. you really need to either continue this or to write a sequel. poor saable-chan!
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  • From ANON - Naida Nadeshiko on September 17, 2004
    awww....that's so sad. **glomps saable-sama** you can't just leave it like this. i'm not exactly an optimistic person, but i prefer happy endings to angsty ones. plus, poor saable is so depressed. can't you fix that?
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  • From ANON - iceheart3000 on July 20, 2004
    Aw, poor Sabel. I really think you need a sequel to this, just so Sabel doesn't have to be so alone. But anyways, it was really good and I hope you wrote another one like it soon.
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