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Reviews for Passion

By : syaoranlover713
  • From Rezalda on July 09, 2008
    Just a nitpick, but the hymen is located at the entrance to the vagina. Other than that, it was a cute story, and I liked the ending. :)
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  • From ANON - Xiao Lee on September 11, 2005
    Hello, your lemon was cute! love it!
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  • From ANON - NUNICHAN on May 06, 2005
    Aside from a couple grammar mistakes it was good! I liked the way you did this, a little short but sweet. Keep writing.
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  • From YaoiGoddess on March 23, 2005
    *falls out of chair*

    Sheesh, I know Tomoyo likes to film Sakura, but geeze! Some things just shouldn't be filmed... Though I can sort of see something like this happening. Tomoyo will probably tag along on Sakura's Honeymoon, just to film all that is Sakura.

    You probably could have done a bit better with your writing style, but I did enjoy it. The end really made me smile... and my water nearly spurted out of my nose. *sweat-drops*
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  • From ANON - WILDlyInSaNe on September 16, 2003
    That little Tomoyo, she's a little pervert for taping that. LOL. J/K. That was a good one. It seemed a bit rushed like everything happened all at once, but it was good.
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  • From ANON - EcuaGirl on June 10, 2003
    Hoo boy. Bunch of grammar mistakes, but at least the lemon was ok. Anyway, keep up the good work!!
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