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Reviews for When the truth must be told

By : JoLo
  • From ANON - bunny bubble on November 27, 2006
    oh my gosh.. that was SOOOO cool :D *glomps you and gives lollipop* yayness =P
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  • From ANON - asa reme on October 06, 2006
    That was a really great story, however, could you make your next one slightly less haulting. It seems like your haveing trouble decideing want you want down. Aside from that is was great. I hope you write another story agan, you've got a great imagionation!
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  • From ANON - ami on July 28, 2006
    I dont' really understand why you strayed from the quotations marks, but what ever. nice story.
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  • From ANON - mrsYaoi on June 18, 2005
    okay, i good, but needs some work, esspecially on the the "lemon" part. it took a little long to get to the actual well...'you know' (^.~)
    ANYWAY!!! i completly understand the fact that they're both virgins, but when you're horny, you can't last that long to have a conversation about wheather you should fuck or not. i mean, just think about it. and what do you not know the "facts" about anal sex? when Gary asked, "how are you gonna get off" i so taken aback. Hello?!!? its called a prostate!! just brush against it a few times (with your cock) while stroking your "partner". and there you go. Orgasm! (wow, i'm really sorry if i was or sounded mean, i was just giving suggestions^^ Forgive meh)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2004
    Great fic! You should definitly write more.
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  • From ANON - The Yaoi Mistress on August 06, 2004
    Soooo!!!! good!!!!!! I really love it. it was marvelous!! romantic, and exciting. you have to writte another one soon.

    see you
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