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Reviews for Live while You Can

By : DragonsDaughter
  • From airen0920 on July 28, 2008
    Oh my gosh! My sides are aching! 'Kaoru-dono you should cover up your chest more!' Hahahahahahahahaha! i think that was the highlight of the story! Anyway, i like it i can't understand anything after Sano, Tae and Meg's conversation... it was all 'class style etc' is this some sort of a bug problem in AFF?
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  • From ANON - phobos on September 26, 2006
    Overall this was a good story. My one complaint is how it went from the Kenshingumi talking about how to fix them up right to Kenshin and Kaoru together without any explanation. Was there a missing paragraph or something?
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  • From ANON - sulou on December 14, 2005
    Very nice. I like your writing style. You describe things "just enough," too much detail, I found, takes away, rather than adds to this type of fic. You seem to know where to draw the line.
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  • From ANON - megan on September 12, 2005
    *scratches head* ummmm. . . I think there is a part missing. . . I'm confused. . .*groans hitting head repeatedly on a wall* God I think I should just go to bed. . . Good fic. . . I'm sure the part I missed was good too.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on August 18, 2005
    I don't know if you've noticed or been informed but for about a week or so there's been a large chunk of the middle of your story missing on this site. I'd really appreciate it if you checked that out. I'd be overjoyed if you'd fix it.
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lime on December 01, 2004
    Dear DragonsDaughter,
    I think I know who you are!!! Not in person that is but I wonder if I am write in assuming that IT is You who wrote that magnificent story on FF.net...Ronin Kaoru!! I LOVE THAT STORY!! I am assuming the big bad block got ya? It is a very sad thing indeed, I was so looking forward to the deal with Shishio...Of course, I imagine changing the whole Rurouni Kenshin History has to be more than a bit difficult. Esspecially since there are all those other worldly celestial creatures that have helped mess it up even more..Poor Kenshin. Lost in the world no matter how you put it and not even Kaoru could save him from the loss of Love and the mess of the Hitokiri...

    Anyway, I really enjoyed the Lemon session here, however, I am concerned. It seemed to me that you didn't finish this fic. I got a little confused in the middle...One minute we are in a conversation with Megumi, Tae and Sano and then K/K are beginning their love dance...did I miss something? Plus there are alot of errors, forgotten words, misspellings and various other gramatical problems. This is NOT a flame. I do like your writting style very much but it just seems that you are not displaying your usually fantastic literary art abilities in THIS fic. I know that AFF.net is terribly unreliable and that to err is human so... I'm just saying that with a good ole sit down edit this would be another one of your fantastic stories.

    I hope you keep up the great work! Let me know if there's anything I can do to help.
    ~De Lazy Lady Lime
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  • From ANON - Kao-sweet on September 03, 2004
    Aaawww it is so sweet and steamy!:) I love it could you make a sequel!!!??? oh wef yof you don't I will just have to settle. Thanks for the great story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Clemen on August 23, 2004
    Sweet. I especially love the ending. Until later, take care.
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-cahn on August 23, 2004
    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *screams for more* I need more in order to live ^o^

    Kaoru-chan
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on August 23, 2004
    What a sweet lemon -- I loved it! Sano was perfect, just the right touch of humor to balance out the romance of this story, and the sex was touching (if you'll pardon the pun). ;) What a great image -- Kaoru crawling into bed with Kenshin wearing nothing but a hair ribbon and a smile, and Kenshin thinking she is delirious with fever!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2004
    Undeniably the best RK Lemon out there.
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  • From ANON - Ice candy on August 22, 2004
    That was great! I hope you'll write more RK lemons! ^_^
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