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Reviews for Oranges

By : Tokimon
  • From ANON - Turrtan on July 19, 2015
    This was way too sexy lol great job dude
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  • From Lyfe on June 29, 2007
    Really great, humorously funny! I love LuffyxNami pairings over all the others! Though, when you get the chance to edit it, replace 'orange' with 'tangerine'. Nami loves tangerines, NOT oranges.
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  • From otaku2525 on November 20, 2005
    Excellent.

    Well done.

    Kudos

    Congratulations.

    I ran out of praises.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2005
    *applause*
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  • From ANON - Buggy on October 07, 2005
    Loved your fic, but the reason I'm writing this is because this fic is gonna be deleted. This fic has no disclaimer, and according the main page, it says all fic with no disclaimer are gonna get earsed. I'm just writing this because your fic is too good to be deleted for such a small reason. Please, write a short one up quick, don't let future readers of this fic miss out on it cause of such a silly reason. Your story is too good to lose because of this little technicality.
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  • From ANON - cassi on August 31, 2005
    wow. that was a good fanfic!! and i like how you kept them in character... poor luffy- so clueless!! damn, i thought i liked sanji, but this whole innocent luffy thing gets me going!! ;)
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  • From ANON - butterfly1 on May 27, 2005
    HAHAHAHA
    Luffy and Nami are so Out Of Characters!


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  • From Mic123 on May 16, 2005
    LOL Interesting to say the least, good job
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  • From ANON - raven on January 19, 2005
    hey that was good! it was the first one piece i ever read! ^^ you need work on the grammer though.
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  • From ANON - LORDLUFFY07 OF THE MERRY GO on December 11, 2004
    OKAY, WHAT SANJI SAID AT THE END SOUNDED PERVERTED.
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  • From ANON - Star Kalia on November 23, 2004
    That was pretty good, not great but good. One, I don't think Luffy could be THAT stupid, but he does act like a child most of the time. And two, they are tangerines asshole DX
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  • From ANON - Kikue-chan on September 29, 2004
    Ano... Aringato!
    You think I'm a good het writer!You think I'm a good het writer!You think I'm a good het writer!You think I'm a good het writer! YAY! Thanks for the review, Ima gonna run it through spell check as soon as I get "word" fixed. And I forgot the disclaimer!

    Disclaimer - I dont own One Peice.

    *sigh of relife* Now that thats all taken care of, must start writing "The Fine Line"
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  • From ANON - DarkPenguin on September 29, 2004
    Whhhooo hooo !!! :D

    I think you did a great job on this!!! Id like to see you write more fanfics for One Piece. Theres not enough het het writers for this fandom I think.
    I would just run it through ad ped perfect or spell check, which doesnt always get rid of all the mistakes ( I should know ^^; ) but it sometimes helps. Keep up the good work though. I think you did a great job.
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  • From ANON - Kikue-chan on September 27, 2004
    Ano....
    I am the author, and this is only my third fic, and my first one peice fic. If you like this one I have a Hellsing in my head, and Artemis Fowl in my head and..... A couple Naruto, Inu Yasha, and some originals. Please Review!
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