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Reviews for I Couldn't Move On

By : Elvy
  • From ANON - Bongo Queen on November 20, 2005
    First of all let me just write that your character comparison to the comic and show is very good! Nothing makes a fanfic better than a fanfic that has characters just the ones in the show! and your going to write a sequel right? You'd better because I just love your writing style!!
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  • From ANON - Ngty_Novelist on November 03, 2005
    OMG how could you...dang it....oi...I give up. T_T more keep going...Ur scaring me with that ending *hides*
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  • From ANON - drake220 on November 01, 2005
    this was really nice! I liked it alot. The ending was a bit odd as I did not think you were continuing the story but the ending seems like it will. Whatever. Nice lemon.
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  • From ANON - Ranma151773012 on September 28, 2005
    My goodness. I loved this story so much because it had a plot, it had grammar, it was probably the best fic I've read here to date. That being said there were a few moments that needed a beta due to a missing word or a grammar issue. I would love to read the story unfolding at the end. That sounds like quite a tale! Please feel free to continue...because I would love to read that story too. Call me greedy. Otherwise you should be proud of the story you told. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Sara on September 17, 2005
    *squee* I'm a newer fan to FMP!, but I love it and have seen the series as well as most of the Fumoffu; and I've started collecting the manga as well. You've done a very good job with this fic, from the characters, to dialogue, to scenes - everything! ^_^ Of course, Gauron *would* have to show up and pose a threat to Kaname! *grr* Are you going to continue this in another fic??? Please e-mail me if you do!!!
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  • From ANON - Annoyance on August 19, 2005
    It was a pretty good fanfiction but I feel sorry for Tessa. She barely ever gets Sagara. Could you please make another one that has Tessa win his heart?
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  • From ANON - Lynne on August 08, 2005
    I loved it. Very in character, very sweet, and just the right amount of lemon. :) I'm impressed, especially since this is your first fic. I hope you'll be writing some more FMP! fanfiction, there certainly isn't enough of it. Great job!
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on July 27, 2005
    oh wow that was awesome =D you portrayed Chidori and Sousuke so well, and it was really funni =)
    How about writing one with Mao and Kurz? *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Kinnara on July 11, 2005
    *looks at email address* It means Hell. Like the fic cuz you make them sound so into character, but you made Kurz more of a dumbass than usual...brilliant! And Souseke, in his usual militay-mode. God, how can he be so DENSE?! Love it. *tries to hug author* I wish I could, but I don't know you... Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - reene on May 12, 2005
    Wow! Nice job. I love how you wrote this; everyone was very in-character. It was funny, romantic, and the lemon was seductively sweet. This has to be the best SXK fic I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - silverose on January 25, 2005
    I really liked this story and i see that you left it open for a sequel. I would love to see a sequel
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  • From Mic123 on November 25, 2004
    Very well done, a very indepfth story, keeps you interested through out, nice going, write more on this ok? if not another chapter, mabey a sequil to it would sufice lol but exelently done
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  • From ANON - Alas on November 09, 2004
    *dies* OH MY KAMI-SAMA! That was so friggin good! I laughed, 'aww'ed, cried, got horny, and feel in love with Full Metal Panic all over again! I loved the chemistry that sizzled in this fic! Very well planned, written, and plotted. The love scene could even be considered a masterpiece! Beautiful!

    -Alas
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2004
    i loved it!! you are gonna write a sequel aren't you? please *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2004
    Very nice!
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