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Reviews for White Reflection

By : DragonBlade
  • From Loginglog on June 17, 2007
    i like it =]
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  • From ANON - fangsoffury08 on December 22, 2006
    I really liked your story good job and i know what it is like to not get alot of reviews on a story so yeah thats why i reviewed.
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  • From ANON - Amaya on June 08, 2006
    OMG!!!!! I LOVED IT!!! I WILL FUCKING LOVE U FOREVER FOR WRITING THIS STORY!!! AND U TWO ARE FREAKING HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE U SO MUCH!!!!!!!!
    e-mai lem sometime. we'll chat.



    I love you with all my heart, your#1 fan,
    Amaya
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on January 05, 2006
    *fangirls* HaruYuki!!! I hardly ever see that pairing, which sucks because it's actually tied formy favorite FB pairing (alongside a KyoTohruYuki threesome). Yayness! Points for writing an excellent White!Haru, Tohru, Kyo, and all the others. The only one who was a little off was Yuki, though that was mostlybecause you made his actions and reactions around Haru a little TOO extreme.

    Only a couple things really bugged me...

    -Abuse of Black!Haru for a sex scene. I see this as the excuse for sex with Haru too often and it's one of the biggest reasons I'm so selective about what FB fanfiction I read. However, you made up for it by having Haru remember it AND being his confused, sweet self. ^.^

    -calling Tohru an "onigiri". The riceball-thing, canon-wise, is just symbolism; she's not made of rice. Luckily, you seem to have caught your mistake halfway in and stopped.

    -rushing the sex. WAY too much rushing of the sex. Despite her embarressment about it later, Tohru was awful bold during the act and, especially for a first time, that scene felt horribly rushed. It could have done with a lot more foreplay, or at least implied foreplay. While the scene with Black!Haru was good, the ending WAFFsmut placed Yuki wildly out of character. Within a matter of hours, he's gone from being totally devoted to the girl, to being the willing uke to Haru.Too big of a switch too quickly. If you'd even spaced this scene out with a "several days/weeks later" paragraph, showing Yuki and Haru's relationship progressing, it would have felt more natural.

    However, all in all it still fullfilled my daily HaruYuki fix. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Flit on October 22, 2005
    What the author of the anime/manga most likely means is that Yuki has chronic bronchitis in addition to asthma (or maybe instead of?)

    Bronchitis is an inflammation of the major airways in the lungs, and there are two types: acute and chronic. Acute bronchitis is a brief, two or three week period of the sick person being largely bedridden, with a hacking cough and not much strength, usually experienced following a cold, pneumonia, or other disease with coughlike symptoms.

    Chronic bronchitis, which Yuki might have, causes similar symptoms, but instead of clearing up after a few weeks and not really coming back, it's a neverending cycle. If he did improve, he'd only get sick again.

    Asthma is a more likely disease, however. Asthma is also an inflammation of the bronchial tubes, and is also usually chronic. But exertion and heavy breathing on already weak lungs will sometimes cause an asthmatic to have difficulty breathing, or even an asthma attack. My father, a pediatric lung doctor, despairs of people who complain of asthma attacks, and he discovers they haven't been taking their medication. It doesn't matter how much better you feel, the inhaler (most common form of asthma medication currently on the market, or at least the fastest-acting one) is a preventative measure. It should be used before any strenuous physical activity that might cause breathing trouble.

    I apologize for preaching, but my father is, as I said, a pediatric pulmnologist, and I can't help but notice some of these things.
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  • From ANON - shinta pearl on September 21, 2005
    That is so cute!! I love Yuki and Haru!! *huggles*
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  • From ANON - murray the leprechaun on July 26, 2005
    i know i probably already reviewed this cuz i remember reading it, but i'll reveiw again! i love it, truly truly do! yay for late nights and caffeine!
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  • From ANON - Adria on July 25, 2005
    Kawaii!!! I usually don't go for M/M fics, but you've definitely turned me on!
    To the fics I mean...
    Anyway, keep writing and loving Furuba! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on March 25, 2005
    Aawww!!! Soooooo KAWAII!!!!! ^___^ I loved it!!! Angsty, sexy, funny, and-oh-so-sweet........I can't believe you didn't get reviews for this!!! Oh, and I love the A/N's, etc. -- They were almost as good as the story, lol!!! *has a muse and multiple "personas" that act that way sometimes* ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - missyspikehead on March 08, 2005
    oh!! awesome story!! i loved it!! **dances around teh room on a sugar high**
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  • From ANON - SakuraBubbles on February 20, 2005
    ::too lazy to log in:: :b

    This was good. I was a little turned off at the Tohru/Kyo sex because... it seemed very OOC for our little rice ball, but I kept coming back to read it. I think that chapter six was your best chapter, because I love how Yuki felt after the fact. Poor Haru, too. Eee I love him to death... oh, and another thing that kind of killed this for me was the random Japanese. They're already speaking Japanese, so why put the actual romanji? It doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me, unless they were speaking... like... Spanish beforehand and decided to randomly say 'I love you' in Japanese. It's just weird.

    The smut at the end was good. Mmmhmm. I'd like to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - Quilted Elf on January 14, 2005
    I love it!!!! You've captured them perfectly and I love the interactin between Yuki and Haru!!! :-P Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 18, 2004
    This fic is looooooove~ly! Great job, it really made my day. X)
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  • From ANON - YuukiSan on December 15, 2004
    I love this story, I love this story, I love this story! But of course you already know that because I sit on your computer and read at about once a day!!! You write WAFF now and it's all thanks to me!!!! *bows to the appluding audience*. Though now I write angst and fight scenes because of you so here I say 'Give me back my WAFF and I'll give you back your damn angst!!!!'

    I love Haru/Yuki!!! I love it, love it, love it! Remember when I hated Haru/Yuki, hey on that note remember when I hated yoai. And now look at me I'm going to write my own Haru/Yuki!!! *shoots dagers at you while drying hair and looking absolutly adorable...ahhh gotta love Shuichi* Love the break down scene...poor Yuki all consufed. But I ust say writing break down scenes are fun and so are fight scenes. Gah give me back my WAFF damn it!!!

    You also have to thank me on writing a Fruba fic. I remember it well that because I got my idea you got yours. So again I say "Thank you, thank you!!!" You should write another one!!! Only this one...lots of angst and fighting...and give me back my damn WAFF!!!!

    And this is why I shouldn't read InuYasha fics before reviewing.
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  • From ANON - Koi Boy on December 14, 2004
    i loved this, it was so fucking awesome! woot.
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