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Reviews for Apology Accepted

By : Klepto
  • From ANON - Ian on December 16, 2004
    Awesome story! I liked your hormone/brain ect. thing, that was cool.
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  • From ANON - balalaika on October 25, 2004
    GREAT STORY!!!!
    I love pikachu, and the little voices are realy funny!!!
    good work, I'll be laughing for days on end now
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  • From ANON - Koga on July 25, 2004
    This was really good you shoud deffinetly make a continuation!
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  • From ANON - INGA on February 10, 2004
    OMG!!! THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST THING IVE READ ALL NIGHT!!!
    i loved the "Stroke alley" bit!!
    FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS YAOI YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angel on February 05, 2004
    .......lol, soo good, loved it, and fell out of the chair laughing, it was great, i hope you write tons more like it ^_^
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  • From ANON - chi on January 24, 2004
    nice story
    r u gonna continue
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  • From ANON - cassie on January 07, 2004
    awww that story was so sweet =)
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  • From ANON - Dami on December 24, 2003
    *rolls around on the floor* BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! *tears streaming out of eyes*

    OH MY GOD THAT WAS GREAT! *more rolling around on the floor*

    BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!!

    *ahem* I especially loved the war-inside bit. It was GREAT! (GO HOROMONES!)

    Usually I find Pikachu a yellow rat that deserves to die, but in this story I find his(or is it a her? >.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2003
    lol. i love the brain heart hormone etc. thing. "gyah! talk talk, this isnt opera, lets fuck god dammit". i love it!!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 23, 2003
    This was an interesting and romantic story. I'm glad that Ash and Gary got together, they do make a beautiful couple. Anyways you have to write out chapter 2 real soon, because I'm anxious to finish reading it.
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  • From ANON - Lois on July 22, 2003
    That was good.. LOL the main highlight of the day was the narratar. GOod old him. Still there
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  • From ANON - Angel on July 01, 2003
    Hey there i like the story a lot. hmmmm Ash and Gary together, makes a cute couple. What a way to accept a apology hehehe.......Angel
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  • From ANON - Vesta on June 18, 2003
    This fic was okay. I've definitly read better. I think that the whole way with the IM conversation is confusing, it's a kind of wierd way to write. The smut scene was pretty good, but it would have been better if it hadn't been all through a conversation. Both Gary and Ash were terribly OoC, Gary would NEVER come up to Ash and admit he was an asshole. That is definitly not how things work. This was a good attempt, but I would highly suggest writing in prose from now on. It's much easier for people to understand.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2003
    ::is laughing really hard:: I luv this! please write more!
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