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Reviews for Until Your Dying Day

By : omukashi
  • From ANON - FurrySlaver2000 on May 01, 2005
    Original, I must say. A problem that even Chii would be hard-pressed to understand. Please have him survive for a while, at least: it will destroy her, in the end, if he dies. Otherwise, keep on going. You truly have an original direction for this particular couple.
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  • From ANON - unimportant on April 04, 2005
    Eh, like you said, the grammar's kinda bad, but at least you know that. I've quite a few "writers" who think their writing is perfect despite the opinions of others and constructive criticism. But your first chapter is cool. I wanna see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Electroberry on April 02, 2005
    It felt more like a romance fic than a sex fic. You've put out the setup here, so it could end up as a good story, be there has to be an act two.

    The other thing is, and I'm not sure how you're going to get around it, people dying of cancer aren't really in a position to have hot steamy sex. So how you solve that problem is going to influence whether the story ultimately comes out okay.
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  • From ANON - fushigiyugifan on March 21, 2005
    this actually sounds like it is going to be good pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon.
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  • From on March 08, 2005
    Nice story i like where this is going so far. Keep it up.
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