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Reviews for In The Shadows, In The Light Arc

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Beysie on September 02, 2005
    Hey ID, it's Beysie from Kirafics!!!! I haven't reviewed anyone in a very long time, so consider yourself lucky I've given two now! LOL j/k... Such a good dog you are! I read the first arc, and now this... I've finally caught up and finished chap 10... I can't wait for more! Damn, I gotta direct Schu and Rann here, I think they'd love how you've depicted them... quite accurate! Except that our Schuldig is uke... LOL It's funny because IC he and Rann are both married to Yohji too! Anyway, I went off topic... this fic is awsome! It drew me in so much... I kept losing track of time. I look forward to the next update!


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  • From ANON - deunan on September 02, 2005
    What a great triad! I love this arc. Yohji and Aya are perfect, and Schuldich is really funny.

    I thought Crawford should be more of a bastard though. I like the concept of the cleaners though. It makes sense.

    And the angst is great. Can totally see Aya being masochistic and Yohji being horrified and hurt by it.
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  • From ANON - Lillie on August 29, 2005
    I've finally gotten to read the last couple of chapters like I've been promising myself to do for too long!

    I'ts hard to review when I've already said how much I love this arc. But it just gets better and more intriguing.

    I'm not sure who I feel sorriest for at the moment - although it think it might come down to Schuldig and Crawford, seeing as Aya is pissed off with both of them. And then there's poor Yohji as well.

    Can't wait to see what Crawford has in mind, and if Aya decides to act on his plans of revenge!



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  • From ANON - mel on August 27, 2005
    I really love this fanfic so much, Schuldig x Aya x Yohji is just one hell of a perfect threesome. And you write it so well ^_^ I will definitely devour every single new chapter, so please write more!
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  • From ANON - Sexxi Twisted Angel on August 25, 2005
    Oohhh...revelations for everyone in these last two chappies. Aw...Brad's being a bit of an asshole isn't he. Schu and Aya are going to be pissed...after all Aya's already pissed by Schu and Schu by Brad. So then everyone will want to kill Brad lol...or...well...no predicting for me. I'll wait like a good girl.
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  • From ANON - moimoi-chan on August 24, 2005
    I like how you moved this from being a PWP to actually having a story line...keep up the good work...can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - ApolloImperium on August 24, 2005
    You dirty dog!

    (I can't break tradition)

    This chapter and Interlude were deep...I like it.

    Not that the first story of mind blowing sex wasn't neat, but this is awesome...The possibilities are endless, I adore it! I can't wait for the next update...Dun make us wait so long next time!

    Apollo
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on August 24, 2005
    I love it. i've been dying to see what would happen next and i am
    a very happy kitty. keep it coming i definitely want to know what
    happens next. also, will Brad tell Yohji that the two of them had
    met before?
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  • From ANON - lynn on August 23, 2005
    Yeah updates! I read both this and the push it update ::thumb up:: as always, you have awesome story lines and keep my favorite characters in character. I didn't even read Weiss Kreuz until i checked out all your posts. At the risk of sounding a little too admiring...whatever you post, i'll read.
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  • From ANON - Bishonen no Miko on August 23, 2005
    Loved Farf and Nagi in these last two chapters... what a shock to find out that Schu was involved with two of the Weiss boys. And now we know a bit more about Yohji's talent. This is a great story... I can hardly wait to read more, and was so happy to see an update right before going to bed :)
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  • From writeright on August 23, 2005
    Evil wench, teasing us all like this. Now I'm wondering where you're going to go with this. Is it bad that I can relate to the feeling of being a human battery everyone seems to drain? *Slaps you with a fish*

    CP the silly
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on July 26, 2005
    Oh please write more you can't stop there.need more !
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  • From ANON - Apollo on July 22, 2005
    Oops...I hit the wrong keys and sent that one early - Ah well, it still sorta kinda starts this review cause in my mind I was only leaving one...That prolly didn't make much sense, but then again it is like 7am in the morning and my head is still going in circles from the last chappie and interlude.

    That is SOOO something Aya would do, thinking that he needed to do a penance...and that glove...that was inspired? firghtening? Is it real? Or did you make it up?

    And poor Yohji, he is always being portrayed as the sex toy, it's so natural that he would end up thinking that Aya thinks of him like that (Personally, I think it's his own fault for whoring around so much, but that's just my opinion)

    I just am adoring this - I really think that if you entered this in the scarlet seducations contest you would have a good chance of winning, or even the first one...There's a yahoo group for the contest and I think the link is on the group. Email me, I'll let you know!

    Apollo

    (Oh, and just for good measure, "You dirty dog!"
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  • From ANON - Apollo on July 22, 2005
    You dirty dog...
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  • From ANON - juri on July 18, 2005
    Aya: “Spank me hard until I tell you to stop.”

    !!! *nosebleeds to death*

    I just had to go read Penance again *love*. Unh, Aya needy and squirming is such a turn on! Especially when it's up against Yoji.

    (have to stop spamming you now)
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