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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2015
    Dude. It's been five years. Either update or give it to someone else.
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  • From whitetiger on February 08, 2013
    Please update. I know it's been a long time but it really is an amazing story.
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  • From ANON - audi on August 31, 2012
    i love you work. this story amazing and i love the developing relationships as it continues. (Though honestly, i want more of ShuxRanxYouji). Your attention to detail is superb. i particularly like Hakuryuu.

    i do have one point though, when Gojyo starts calling Sanzo 'anata'. You are /kinda/ right about the meaning, but it's old school and not common anymore. It's also female. And Gojyo speaks very masculinely. [He refers to himself as 'ore' as do Sanzo and Goku, but for 'you' he uses 'omee' rather than 'omae', or 'temee' when he's pissed.] While Sanzo can use proper Japanese, Hakkai is the only one who does regularly.

    Yeah, it's a little thing but i live in Japan and speak Japanese so...


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  • From ObsidianJade on May 03, 2010
    I have greatly enjoyed your most recent Saiyuki works, but I'm rather hoping that at some point you will find the time and inspiration to continue this wonderful story. You must admit, you've left us hanging in a rather cruel position. What ever becomes of Nataku and his secrets? Does Sanzo ever fess up to the origami? And when does everyone come clean to everyone else about their bed partners? (The last would presumably be 'at the end of the story,' which at the given rate would probably be somewhere around chapter sixty...)

    Just a little note to let you know the story is still being read and enjoyed and more chapters would, as always, be appreciated.

    ~ Sarah
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  • From BlaikeDhei on September 17, 2009
    Ah wonderful! Thank you for that. It's all good, everyone makes mistakes every now and again.

    Oh, Goku... You're so funny. XD
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  • From xst3ph90x on September 17, 2009
    Right now I'm only on chapter 8, and it's already amazing. I can't wait to see whats next!
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  • From BlaikeDhei on September 16, 2009
    Hello. I actually just made an account so I could ask you a question: why is chapter 31 not posted on AFF? I don't remember the exact title but it was "something Epiphany." I was just wondering.

    Love this story, love the Lost Cadre, and I can't wait for Balancing Karma. If it does end up getting picked up to be published I will definitely be purchasing. =)

    - Blaike
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  • From vbruce on April 13, 2009
    Yay! So happy to see that you're still working on this one.
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  • From Dragon7 on April 13, 2009
    Fantastic chapter keep up the good work.
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  • From Cateyes on December 03, 2008
    I really enjoyed reading this and hope it isn't over yet, because yea! the entire group is back together! Plus I'm really wondering about how Nataku ended up as a Magpie and if he'll ever get back to his true form. He was such a great character.

    Hopefully there will be more, cause I really wanna see how this all ends!
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  • From HarukasWomen on September 21, 2008
    More please This story is so great would love to see how it ends.
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  • From rowen on August 08, 2008
    I am so THRILLED for this update. It breathes life into me once again. I cannot wait for more! I always love it when there are secrets, because I enjoy thinking about what will happen when they are outed. Most fics never deliver, though. They'll build up to it and build and build, and then when the secret's blown, everyone takes it in stride, and within the chapter everything's hunky dory again. If and when your story takes that turn, I remain hopeful that your solution will be fantastic.

    Either way, your updates rock my world. Cheers.
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  • From Dragon7 on August 07, 2008
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I'm glad that they got thing work out and the last part was so FUNNY.......LOL
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  • From KadeSable on August 07, 2008
    Oh wow, I really like this story!! It's amazing!! Please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE UPDATE soon!!! Seriously, this is like...the best Saiyuki fanfic I've ever read! The relationship between Sanzo and Gojyo is portrayed amazingly. And it's awesome. And I totally love you dude. Please update soon. Please?

    ~Vixie
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  • From TrillienRose on May 20, 2008
    please, oh PLEEAASSSEE, update soon!!!!!!!
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