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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Julie E. on November 01, 2005
    Another one!
    You're just awesome. I was so pleased when I saw this. Quality hot smut as usual. I loved it--I especially liked the new invention of the Kinky Antenna. Just love it all.
    Julie
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  • From ANON - faradheia on October 31, 2005
    Dear God!!!!!!!! Wow!!! And here I'd mentioned that hair fetish! gah- I'm all melted and gooey!!!!!

    Damn!! What a wonderful next chapter!!!! thank you thank you!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on October 31, 2005
    Well I started reading the first in this series about an hr ago and then continued to whip through the rest until I finished this one. Love them. I'm not really fond of Gojyo and Sanzo together but I actually found this sexy and compelling...thus I read all of them. Hehe. I sincerely hope there's more to come in this series. And I wouldn't be against you writing something with either of the other two boys. Your stories or chapters or whatever you want to call them had a nice flow and while you went OOC a bit it wasn't like totally off the wall and just made the charries fit better with the story. Which...I liked and am all for. So yeah...keep up the good work and I hope to get to read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Rayvenfire2005 on October 31, 2005
    I just love this series! Every story gets better and better. Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2005
    *THUD* holy crap that was hot. I'm amazed the way you continually outdo yourself with these fics.
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  • From ANON - Jukebox on October 30, 2005
    That was sooo hot. I love this series of yours and hope there will be more. I'm at a loss as to which one in the series I like the best. I thought it might be the water one, but this one with the antennae....*gasp, fans self* I especially luv it when Sanzo is uke. And the whole song bit, very nice touch with it being something only Sanzo can hear.
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  • From ANON - Mat on October 30, 2005
    Goddamnit. If I weren't so hard I can't think straight just now I might write a more useful review... mind you, if it were much better I'd probably be too busy cleaning up to write one. As it is, I'm going for a shower. >.>
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  • From ANON - SexxiTwistedAngel on October 30, 2005
    ...*faints*. Very nice...*fans self*. Oh man...I love it when you update your stuff...cuz they're always really good updates.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on October 29, 2005
    *Purrs* Excellent as usual, Iron Dog. Lol! A few specifics:

    Gotta love the vibrator, lol. My favorite toy to write with! ...About. *Rolls her eyes* Lol.

    You're talking about anal beads, right? I've seen those used once in awhile, nice choice. *Winks*

    Gotta love 69, heh..

    I've actually never heard of that sort of dildo, lol. Interesting...

    Ooh, Gojyo, so they're SENsitive? ...*Evil grin* My mind is probably running along the same lines as Sanzo's here, lol. I so would have done the exact same thing Sanzo did when he found out what was going on, lol.

    As usual, you did an awesome part, lol. So tell me:

    Is Sanzo going to be a complete prick and caress them when nobody is looking for the next week until Gojyo throws his over a fallen tree and fucks him hard out of frutration? Lol!
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  • From ANON - Cranberry on October 26, 2005
    Guess I can't do html on here?

    The link is: http://madkukkii.com/saiyuuki/handa/handa.html
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  • From ANON - Cranberry on October 26, 2005
    Hot. I've read this like... three times, and it's still kinky and hot and sooo yummy. I just came across the cover of a Sanzo/Gojyo) doujinshi showing the same thing... on this site. Not for sale though (none of hers are :(). But can you only imagine?? ::wants::
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  • From ANON - Colene on October 25, 2005
    (Bursting out laughing loud enough to make unwary passersby look towards house in surprise) That was great! I'm not too big of the pairing, but I thought I would read it because of the rating, and I'm glad I did. This kind of fic is exactly what I like with just the right amount of kink and humour to have me going on laughing for a while. Sanzo was really... how to say without getting shot...(there is no way) cute! Sanzo pouting towards the end was pure genious. Keep on writing like this and I'm going to have to change my mind on this particular pairing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2005
    I read the first part of this somewhere ages ago, but didn't know you'd written more. Am I glad you did! THis is hands down one of the hottest series I've seen, and so well written! Kudos to you! I'm going to go hunt down the rest now.
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  • From ANON - Jukebox on October 23, 2005
    Nice!! I love Gojyo/Sanzo. And having the water do "special" things to the monk was just delicious...mmm
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  • From ANON - Pyrzm on October 22, 2005
    One of the best GS I've ever read!
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