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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch
  • From KatzeRaoul on March 22, 2008
    PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, DON'T WAIT AS LONG AS YOU DID BEFORE, OR SOMEONE HAS A SPANKING IN THEIR FUTURE.*smiles devilishly*
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  • From Dragon7 on March 14, 2008
    This is a great story please continue writing and post again soon.

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  • From vbruce on December 02, 2007
    Always happy to see you update this story. Such creative modes of torture. Excellent work, as always.
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  • From eponagoddess on October 24, 2007
    I forgot to say this before:

    The way you write these guys so in character, it's just amazing. Your way with words, and emotions, is just awesome. And of course, the kink was hotter than most anything I've read! So incredibly HOT! And your imagination just puts mine to shame (and I've got a pretty damn good one). I'm very much looking forward to any and everything else you write!

    (After reading this, I read most of your other fics, and they were just as incredible (no matter the pairing, yaoi or not, no matter the series). Even if some of the characters I wasn't familiar with...it didn't matter. Yes, I need to go back and review the others...and I will, I promise!)

    Saiyuki is my favorite...and now you're my favorite author! Thanks again!
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  • From eponagoddess on October 24, 2007
    I must say that this is the best Saiyuki I've ever read. I loved every chapter, and your writing is so creative! I've read all the chapters over and over again...and it never gets old.

    Will there be more chapters added to this? I certainly hope so!

    Thanks for sharing your awesome talent with us mortals!


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  • From jukeboxcsi on October 12, 2007
    Wickedly delicious! You have such a gift for writing erotic scenes that leave me drooling.
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  • From Dragon7 on October 02, 2007
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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  • From vbruce on October 02, 2007
    Fabulous, as always. I'm still rather interested as to exactly why Nataku decided to somehow turn himself into a magpie. Intriguing to say the least. Love Gojyo's constant introduction of new kinks into Sanzo's life. Well done.
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  • From KansouAme on October 01, 2007
    Oh yeah!! Another beautiful chapter!! This is one of my favorite fictions and I am always smiling when I see you update! I wish I had something more "reviewy" (I know..not a real word) to say but I just can't stop grinning at the moment. Thanks!!
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  • From redd on August 07, 2007
    I really enjoy your writing and absolutely love this fic! I think you've managed to hold true to the character's original personalities while giving them depth, especially Sanzo and Gojyo. I like the way you've developed their relationship, both physical and emotional. And let's face it, the sex just is HOT! I love that Gojyo is a major major perv and that Sanzo matches him kink for kink while also getting taught some very creative lessons. I'm always checking your site for updates to this and your other fics, keep up the good story writing, you've got quite the imagination:)
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  • From Dragon7 on August 07, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From nimblnymph on July 15, 2007
    Geh... why aren't there more reviews for this?! You need more. You need a TON more. You have single handedly convinced me that GojyoxSanzo is a workable pairing. It's hot... as in, I think my panties caught fire numerous times. It's got some working plot. I love it. I also love the whole Gojun/Hakuryuu thing with Hakkai. That last chapter left me drooling, puddled mass of fangirl goo on the floor. Soooo delicious!

    I think the most awkward thing though was reading through some of the kink bits and going, "Oooh, yeah... that really DOES feel amazing!" It was kinda like reading bits of my sex life on the screen... only hotter... with two very pretty boys... *ahem* And now we're moving on.

    I think maybe I need to pimp this smut fic out a little. Yesss... pimping is required so others may bask in the erotic delights you shower us with.
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  • From fangirlqueen on June 27, 2007
    Awww ^_^ im so happy for those two. Hakkai deserves some love in his life.
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  • From Chiad on June 27, 2007
    *flails wildly and then grabs a towel to mop up the drool* Oh. My. More please!
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  • From bluesnake40 on June 26, 2007
    Haven been waiting eagerly for an update so it was great to see another chapt up. This was great and really enjoyed reading it. I thoroughly enjoy reading your pairing of Hakuryuu/Hakkai. Their relationship comes across as being epic and yet so touching. Even though Hakuryuu speaks in such few words, his feelings of love and concern towards Hakkai really come through. I can't wait to read the next update. Keep up with the great writing!
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