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By : Sc00byD00315
  • From ANON - CRACKERS on August 03, 2005
    Loved the story write more soon!bye
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  • From Sc00byD00315 on August 03, 2005
    my aim is Sc00by D00 0315 if anyone wants to talk to me
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  • From Sc00byD00315 on August 03, 2005
    also i'm sorry for the thoughts in here. for some reason dont want to go italic for me. umm... if anyone knows if there is a way to do it that way please tell me.
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  • From Sc00byD00315 on August 03, 2005
    sorry about the chapter spacing this. it slipped my mind. to any of those who don't post stories, on the preview it comes out spaced but when posted it gets smashed. really sorry, i will fix it. and for the idea of weather i never thought of it. thanks. for tatsumi i think this is how he would act but if he seems too much like a crybaby please tell me. i will try and make him a little tougher. i hope you guys will post again and please write if you want to see so watari/tatsumi action.
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  • From ANON - kiokukaiba on August 03, 2005
    yay! Another good chapter! You should try separating your paragraphs a tad more though, I must admit, I got a bit confused! lol! But still, such a teeny tiny mistake isn't big enough to change my opinion! Wonderful plot still! ooh, locked in a secluded house! Me likey! What wonderful little things will those two be getting into? *bounces* Do you have aim? Say hi sometime! I'm cryoftheicetears and I'd love to talk to you more! Anyway, update when you can! I'll keep checking back!
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  • From kryren on August 03, 2005
    I'm liking this so far, and the concept is interesting. Everyone seems pretty much in character, with Tatsumi being a small exception. He just seems a bit over zealous. however, that may not be exactly OOC for him. everyone sees different parts of a character's personality.

    One suggestion, if I may. While describing what is happening is fine and all, to really flesh out a story and give it life one should also describe ambients. An example would be in the second chapter, Tsuzuki and Hisoka are on earth. Is it warm out? Windy?

    As I said, your story is interesting and quite enjoyable sofar. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Witchy Willow on August 02, 2005
    Hey this is off to a good start! I loved Dirty Laundery and the promise of something new and
    yet similar is certainly good. I love that you are showing Tatsumi's possesive streak and Hisoka's
    sometimes highly annoying grumpiness. I hope you continue on with this!
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  • From ANON - EGO on July 31, 2005
    I like your story and want to read more update soon!
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  • From ANON - kiokukaiba on July 31, 2005
    Hm, I'm not a member of aff.net, though I need to be, but I will certainly review this! I, too, have read 'dirty laundry' and I absolutely loved it! I wish that there were more stories with Muraki on bottom! Sexy guys are best on the bottom, there's just something hot about that...anyways, my only advice is to try to go into a bit more detail, other than that, you have me on the edge of my seat in anticipation for the next chapter! I'll definitely be on the lookout for it!
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