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Reviews for Special Ingredient

By : fullmetalyoai
  • From ANON - yaoigrl on December 28, 2006
    I like this anime and I like this pairing and I even like your writing style...however I'm sorry to say this, as this will be the first negative thing I have ever mentioned in a review, *takes deep breath* your plot is lame! Semen bread...oh come now be serious!
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  • From ANON - Joan Reverie on November 12, 2006
    Hm, it seems to be missing something.
    I can't figure what.

    But alas, it was a good concept...
    Though it did make my face scrunch up at the mere thought of that ingredient in bread.
    Hehe.
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  • From ANON - leah on August 26, 2006
    oh man, all i have to say is LOL.
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  • From ANON - da on February 10, 2006
    can you make another yaoi story?pliz
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  • From ANON - Paradiseboy on January 22, 2006
    Oh yeah! Suwabara not swabara.I forgot!
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  • From ANON - Paradiseboy on January 22, 2006
    Lemme make this clear.Me not gay! But your story was humorous and written rather well.Just one thing, its semen not seamen!!!
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  • From ANON - thooruchan on January 11, 2006
    That was SO funny! XDD
    Really, you have an incredibly fruitly imagination, and you should spend all your wakening ours writting stuff like this!
    Wanna se a kawachixAzuma next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - YakiPan Freak on December 09, 2005
    .......Special.....Very special.....

    It's "Suwabara," not "Swabara." And "semen," not "seamen."

    They both seemed pretty out-of-character. Suwabara should be left to Monica.

    "It said that the samurai of old often used something special to add flavor to their breads when they were in isolation."
    "The book said that intercourse was the best"

    Right... so... um... yeah... anyways...

    And Pierrot isn't gay. His girlfriend left him because he has ED.

    And thanks to you, I will forever have the image of Suwabara buttering his erection burned into my mind.

    One more thing:

    KAWACHI X AZUMA = OTP :-P
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  • From on November 24, 2005
    A Category for Yakitate Japan has been created! For tips on how to move your story, please visit the FAQ's section!

    Reminder: All stories must have a disclaimer!
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