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Reviews for A Night of Passion

By : Blooddutches
  • From ThePairingGuy on June 05, 2009
    Pretty good. Like crysta said, there's too much silly sex talk, and also everything is much too flat in the opening. It sounds robotic, and just flat out deciding "we're going to have a night of passion" isn't very romantic. Also, you didn't even mention the danger of Kusanagi having sex. In Blue Seed 2 we found out that just kissing someone can make an aragami completely lose hold of his human form. How does Kusanagi have sex without going all clawed and spiny?

    Other than that, good descriptions and pacing, and no "yuck" moments like a lot of lemons have. It's hot, passionate, but not overdone.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - crysta on December 10, 2005
    it was ok
    a little to much bad sex talk but fine
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