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Reviews for Polychronic

By : myth
  • From pril6comcast on March 13, 2009
    awesome, I love WA!
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  • From ANON - Serenve on April 23, 2008
    My oh my!! Like I say!!! There should be more Wild Adapter FAMFICS!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!! (crowd cheering)
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  • From Monochromatic on January 03, 2008
    I really liked this! Excellent emotion and good capture of the characters. I particularily liked the ending.
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  • From ANON - chii.sephyn on April 20, 2007
    hey hey! i hardly see a WA fanfic. this is good =) by the way, i have one too, on ffnet. http:// www. fanfiction. net/ s/ 3454094/ 1/ i don't know if the link won't work like ffnet so i'm separating it just in case. cheers!
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  • From ANON - Hei on August 10, 2006
    ...I love you. because you write W.A smut....and it was GOOD smut. Not some half assed crappy shit. -Worships.-
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  • From ANON - cranberry on January 20, 2006
    Yay! A Wild Adapter fic! And a good one, too. :)
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 18, 2005
    YES! WA YAOI!!! this is what i've been waiting for ;_; thank you.. it was great!!!!
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  • From ANON - chuck on October 15, 2005
    grrrr, aff ate my review!! Well, I'll try and remember it all.....

    You know I love this, but I'm telling you again. *big hearts* You write them so well, you've got their rhythms and inflections down to the point where I can hear them speaking as I read. Wonderful how you illustrated how much Kubota reacts to Tokitoh in this (well, "much" for him - racing heart, etc. - though still subdued since it it Kubota XD), much more than he did with others. Kubota's perviness was great here, I love that he kept the condom from Minekura's fic with him, waiting for the opportunity to strike. XD Nice also that you had Toki yell at him for it, didn't disrupt the mood much and made it seem even more like them. (Many authors seem to think nobody talks or laughs or anything during sex, which isn't true.) I liked the line with Tokitoh opening one eye, then the other - Minekura loves to draw her men all squinty-eyed, so I can totally picture Toki doing this. The smut was lovely - not too overboard for their first time, still manages to keep that sort of fragility they have with each other that makes us sigh over them. And the ending was wonderful - him losing his place brings it back to the title and Kubota's forever multi-tasking mind, and how Tokitoh requires all his concentration. *loves* Keep writing these two! *goes to make fanart*
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  • From ANON - chuck on October 15, 2005
    wah! You already know I love this fic, but I'm telling you again. I LOVE IT.
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