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Reviews for Birth Rite

By : tsutsuji
  • From Metranome on June 14, 2011
    I reeeally hate doing this kind of thing, but I have to ask in this case: will there ever be more of Birth Rite written, or should I resign myself to crying a little and then moving on? The thing is, I love your stories to bits, the Slayers-related ones in particular, but I haven't seen even a ghost of activity here in forever. Is the dream really over? Should I not come back here anymore? It breaks my fic-loving heart to ask, but I need to know. I apologize if my words have offended you; I just needed to get them out.
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  • From Metranome on April 10, 2011
    So very much looking forward to the next chapter! I'm more intrigued with each paragraph, and if "Poison" was any indication of your plot-weaving skills, I believe I can expect quite a few more surprises as the story progresses.
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  • From chrissysky on February 07, 2010
    (Chapter 15) ZEL IS GOING TO GET IT! SO HARD! omg, he's really asking for it.

    Milly seems fun! And for some reason, I feel like his plain and unimpressive appearance is something he did on purpose? If you don't want to be impressive, be as unimpressive as possible. XD
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  • From chrissysky on February 06, 2010
    (Chapter 14) Aw, Myona's sweet, I'm glad the boys are letting him hang out with them for awhile. And yes, Xellos, when you have Zel in a tub, naked and eager, your mind should really be on the present! They are such newlyweds.
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  • From chrissysky on February 06, 2010
    (chapter 13) Haha! Zel was really bored, he just doesn't want to admit it. And them getting in trouble for their lover's quarrel/training was amusing too.

    After what we learned about the Claire Bible in Rev-Evo, does it change your feelings about this chapter at all?
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  • From chrissysky on February 06, 2010
    (Chapter 12 review) HAHA! I just knew Zel would catch on eventually. "Thinking in his sleep" thus proving that Zel does indeed think too much. Xellos, you're not doing your job! And their morning practise session went rather well. I'm glad Xellos isn't just using it as an excuse for sex, but is actually trying to help Zel get stronger in astral power.
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  • From chrissysky on February 06, 2010
    (Chapter 11 review) Hee! Somehow I think distracting Zel isn't going to be as easy as he thinks.
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  • From chrissysky on July 27, 2009
    XDDD Myona's introduction amused me endlessly, as did Zel getting mildly jealous there. No one else greets him that way indeed. *giggles*
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  • From chrissysky on July 27, 2009
    Actually, I rather like your OCs - from here and from Poison. They may have varying sizes in their roles, but all have a life of their own, which makes the canon characters interacting with them that much more interesting. One isn't waiting until the boys are alone for more smexing, but also looking forward to them meeting new people. So, no worries.

    I also rather liked Kemara from the previous story and am glad we're seeing here again. Marcus amuses me quite a bit too.
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  • From chrissysky on July 27, 2009
    Yay, cat boy! So cute. ^^; And yay, vengeful!Zel. Still enjoying it.
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  • From chrissysky on July 27, 2009
    Aw, that's sweet. Xel was so conflicted but Zel figured it out - such a smart boy - and made it better. Onto next chapter...
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  • From chrissysky on July 27, 2009
    Well, I'm up to chapter six now! And I totally didn't see it coming that Martina was the author, but it works. XD
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  • From ANON - San on July 19, 2009
    I started reading Poison and Birth Rite yesterday, and I'm afraid I could not bring myself to stop until I reached the end. You have an addictive writing style, and the plot just drags people in.

    In addition, the way you write the characters is the best I have seen, and I am highly disappointed in myself that I did not stumble across it sooner. I have no idea how I managed that, but I'm glad to have found it after returning to one of my favourite fandoms.

    And as many have most likely told you since the last chapter, I am very pleased to see that you are continuing with the story, and I can't wait to see more!
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  • From Metranome on February 26, 2009
    Just reviewing to tell you I absolutely love your story (and the one that came before this) even after several reads, and that I hope you're able to continue it. I'm not going to say "soon," because I know how life gets in the way, so don't feel I'm harassing you. n_n; I hope you can get a sense of just how enormous a fan I am of your work, though. Your Xel/Zel fics are the kind of thing I aspire to (and generally fail miserably at). ^_^
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  • From ANON - sky on August 07, 2008
    nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! dont stop writing this story it's so good ; ; i love how you write what zel and xellos are saying, it really sound like them. i mean i can actually picture their vioces in my head saying what you have them saying in this fic it's so well written. the 'luv' scenes are awesome as well, sexy, hot, and most important tasteful. and again it's amazing how you can capture all the different personalities of each character. even your oc's have distinctive personalities! i read this and it feels like i'm watching a unreleased episode or something. please dont stop writing it ;; i can be patient ; ; just dont leave it hangin!
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