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Reviews for Birth Rite

By : tsutsuji
  • From ANON - mini_mei on February 13, 2008
    OH~~~~ I love it!
    And it's so hard finding good xel/zel stories nowadays too!
    I actually pulled an allnighter to read Poison
    (and I had to work the next day too urgh...may the Golden Lord bless coffee...and red bull while she's at it)
    I also love the little excerpts of The Princess of Fate at the start of most chapters I actually would love to read those too lol.

    Also I'm quite fond of your original characters they fit very well into the Slayers world also Zelgadis is very much in character as is Xellos.

    Just a little idea on the side: since Xellos is mentioning often that he'd love to see Linas reaction to the books - it would be a funny little interlude ^-^

    Anyway please continiue writing! It's sad to see that the interest in the Slayers has dimmed so much in the past years...and so refreshing to find fanfics like Birth Rite when it has ^-^
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  • From Metranome on January 18, 2007
    I've been keeping up with your writing for almost a year now, I think, and I'm always impressed anew! This is the third time I've read "Birth Rite," and it gets better with each reading. Your characterization of Zelgadiss and Xelloss is better than mine could ever hope to be, and your mastery of plot are enough to make me blush with shame at my own inadequecies, all while I wait avidly for the next chapter! I await more of this fic with great enthusiasm. Long May You Write!
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on October 04, 2006
    It's great, I adore it! And darling, there are no good parts.
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  • From ANON - Metranome on August 09, 2006
    Huzzah! Seme!Zelgadis!!! Oh, and the rest of this story is awesome too, of course. XD You are undoubtedly the best Xel/Zel yaoi writer of all time, better than I could ever hope to be (damn it n_n;). I envy your mad fic-writing skillz. Long May You Write!
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  • From ANON - angelicyokai on August 06, 2006
    I think Seme-Zelgadis would be wonderful...and as always, I am amazed by the depth of plot and character developement in your story. The only thing that could improve it for me would be for Zelgadis to flay Marcus into many tiny pieces.
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  • From ANON - Kaworu on July 14, 2006
    A bath! A bath! //_____^

    Oh, you're great as always. I really, really love your fic //_____^
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  • From ANON - crabapplered on June 27, 2006
    Ah, I'm so glad you're still writting this. It's not only an excelent Slayers story, but it's also one of the best (and only!) Xel/Zel fics out there now.

    I'm very curious about where this'll go, since you imply in the first chapter that Xel gets offed. . . and by Zel. :O shocking! I'm also wondering. . . since Zelgadis is learning all kinds of new tricks, and is intimatly familiar with Xelloss' astral form, is he going to learn to chanel Xelloss' energy into spells? It should be possible (though goodness knows what kind of spell Xelloss would power).
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  • From ANON - Caethes on February 09, 2006
    I absolutly adore this story, as well as I did Poison. You are one of my favorite Slayers fanfic writers. I must urge you to update! I am really interested. You have done a very original story and it is very good so far.
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  • From ANON - Rogue on February 04, 2006
    I just finished reading Poison and damn! It was filled with awesomeness!

    It's so rare to see Xellos actually portrayed as a Mazoku. A real mazoku who feeds of human emotion. I love how you've portrayed him.

    And the interaction between him and Zel is both entertaining and spellbinding. It keeps you wanting more.

    The website started having problems just before I started the last chapter of Poison and it was horrifying beyond words. I'm just glad there was no one in the house to hear me scream.

    I was puttering around my kitchen on a high from finishing such a wonderful story when I suddenly remembered... "Wait...there's a sequal....Whooo!!!"

    And now I shall read it!!

    *grin*
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  • From on January 13, 2006
    I'm lovin this fic more and more lol. I always was disappointed in the series and movies that Zel neve rseemed to gain any power. Was all about Lina lol.
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  • From on January 02, 2006
    Weee so awesome lol. For a while I thought Lina might have been the author. Lol.
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  • From on December 28, 2005
    Awesome chapter. This story certainly has alot of plot twists.
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  • From ANON - skiefury on December 27, 2005
    It's soooo gooood! Every chapter is better than the last, I swear. I don't even read for the rareness of Xel/Zel anymore, the story itself is above and beyond what you get with fanfiction these days. Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Patternsofthree on December 20, 2005
    I just can't thank you enough for having written this 'fic. I read "Poison" a few days ago, while I was idly browsing fanfics from fandoms I'd moved past. You've reminded me of how much I love the Slayers, and ESPECIALLY how much I love Xel/Zel. And they're perfectly realized in this story. When I realized what you were up to with the Harry Potter stuff, I giggled and shook with glee. We won't even DISCUSS my reactions to the steamy scenes.
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  • From on December 09, 2005
    Aww that was great ^^. I've always wondered what a brow demon looked like since I don't think thy showed on in the series. I'd be interested to see what description you write it out to look like.
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