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By : WhiteRaven
  • From ANON - Penis Joy on January 19, 2006
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAH
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  • From ANON - White Raven on January 19, 2006
    Penis Joy is funny
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  • From ANON - White Raven on January 19, 2006
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU IS OS AYG!!!!!
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  • From ANON - comp on January 18, 2006
    First I'd like to blink.
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    What. The. Fuck. Was. That.
    Lan and Maylu are 16-Reaction:ok.
    Lan is a vampire-Reaction:Whatev-WAIT WHAT??? oh okay, fine.
    Lan: I think I just vamped out. Maylu's reaction is unrealistic. In fact the dialogue was pure bulshit.
    It would have been better as: Lann fuuked maylu with a 6-foot long dildo ad then se bled to deth and dyd!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lolly on January 15, 2006
    Pretty good, but I personally think it was way too rushed- there was a lot of potential in it.

    As for the pairings that have no 'evidence' what so ever, who cares? I have 'liked' many people, but believe me, you wouldn't know I liked you unless I actually told you, it's just the way I am. Not all people will be straight forward. So even if we're talking about imaginary cartoon characters, it applies for them too. What, I HAVE to show signs that I like you? NO. So chill out on that.
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  • From ANON - WhiteRaven on January 10, 2006
    "This could be one of the, if not THE MOST, retarded fanfics EVER to be written."

    The fic is just fine, you are simply illiterate.

    "Serously. What the fuck? o.o Look! I can make netto be a vampire anytime! even though there's no evidence.

    I smell hypocrasy(sp, I know. XD)"

    I smell both apples and oranges, they can't be compared because they aren't the same, in mythology you can become a Vampire, in occultism you can awaken to being one, you can't become gay.

    "As for the yaoi...

    "Chaud: a friend of Lan's, but they hate each other."

    Completely untrue. If you've ever watched the later anime, you'd know that they actually begin to warm up to each other."

    ... Uh, I have watched the later anime, and they are still arch rivals, even if they do become closer, they still have a lasting edge toward each other, it's not the same as a so-called love hate relationship, they truly do care for each other, and at the same time hate each other.

    "Laika: Why would you Screw someone who beat you up the first time you met them?"

    "Ditto for Laika."

    Laika doesn't warm up, plain and simple, he thinks emotions are a weakness, but when used correctly they are a great and deadly force.

    "Please know what you're talking about before you try and bash yaoi."

    bash yaoi? excuse me? I'm bashing pairings with no supporting facts, plain and simple, there is nothing in the games, anime, or manga to support Lan or Chaud being gay or to support that they are in love. I am okay with yaoi, but when people do idiotic things with it, it annoys me, no one ever sets anything up, the average yaoi fic goes like this:

    Guy1: hi, I'm Gay, will you screw me in the ass?

    Guy2: okay.

    *they screw*

    not every gay man likes anal sex.

    not every gay man walks up to random people and says that.

    I will admit that my fic was a bit off the wall in places, I sat down, I typed, that was the result, it's that simple.

    I would appreciate if you didn't flame me.


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  • From ANON - omechron on January 04, 2006
    uhh... wow. Just... just... wow. I mean... I agree that there should be some straight fiction, but...

    I dunno... just... take some more time to write it. I didn't even get past the 3rd line of dialogue. Who talks like that?
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  • From ANON - Sai-kun on January 02, 2006
    This could be one of the, if not THE MOST, retarded fanfics EVER to be written. Serously. What the fuck? o.o Look! I can make netto be a vampire anytime! even though there's no evidence.

    I smell hypocrasy(sp, I know. XD)

    As for the yaoi...

    "Chaud: a friend of Lan's, but they hate each other."

    Completely untrue. If you've ever watched the later anime, you'd know that they actually begin to warm up to each other.

    "Laika: Why would you Screw someone who beat you up the first time you met them?"

    Ditto for Laika.

    Please know what you're talking about before you try and bash yaoi.

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  • From ANON - sibs on December 06, 2005
    THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'VE BEEN HOPING SOMEONE WOULD WRITE A GOOD LAN/MAYL FIC FOR AGES!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Shadow force on November 25, 2005
    oh and, it's a good story.
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  • From ANON - Shadow force on November 25, 2005
    "the way girls were now, it was hard to believe anyone was still a virgin."

    very true, sluttiness is quickly becoming the norm, even in intelligent countries such as Japan which are not stupid like america is.
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  • From ANON - Sniggum-pork on November 14, 2005
    I liked it. it be good. but it was kind of rushed.
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  • From ANON - Rose Kitsune.EXE on November 13, 2005
    "First I'd like to say, WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH YOU PEOPLE???!!! WHERE IS THE EVIDENCE FOR ALL YOU CHAUD/LAN/LAIKA/A BIG FURRY GAY BEAR CRAP?! I'M SORRY BUT...

    Chaud: a friend of Lan's, but they hate each other.

    Laika: Why would you Screw someone who beat you up the first time you met them?

    Big furry gay bear: self-explanatory."

    Ouch. T.T

    First thing: I would like to say I LIKE your fic. ^^() Although I'm more of a Laika/Pride person.. meh... I need to write that myself I suppose. Not lemony though! ^^() Anway, I liked it, it seemed a little fast paced, but I'm not complaining. :)

    Secondly: It's RAIKA. In the dub, Laika's name is RAIKA. You used the dub names for everyone else. ^^()

    Thridly: It is true that there is tons of evidence for Lan/Maylu and other such pairings. It's just that you have to look hard into non-existant details to see the gay couples. (Although, I HATE yuri, and never touch the stuff.) Anyway, we don't always have the best of supporting facts for our pairings, but we just see it as cute. At least I do, I'm sure there's tons of fangirls (and boys) who merely write Yaoi to get themselves off. But then, isn't that the same reason you wrote this? So, I for one, don't really see the difference.

    However, I am happy that instead of just flaming us and telling us to write straight fics, you actually wrote a fic. ^^ IT's so annoying to get a review from some dumbass who can't spell telling you how evil Yaoi is and how unless you write straight fics you'll burn in hell. *snorts*

    I would appreciate it if you left the flaming out alltogether, though. ^^() As for the bear.. ew. Just ew. >> That was a rather chep shot, if I do say so myself.

    Finally: I did not leave my email, not because I'm a coward, but because I don't want it out on the internet where anyone can see it. Just incase you get really pissed at this review and start ranting about my not leaving a way to reply. >>
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