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Reviews for Dreamscape

By : sakurazukamori6
  • From ANON - Ri on December 07, 2005
    Poor Takaya. Loved the attotude between him and his sister, only thing though, you wrote her name Miyu later on. anyways keep up the great job. cannot wait to read more ^^
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on December 06, 2005
    Sorry your reviews got erased!!!!!!!! What I said in mine was the usual "love the fic" things, plus I said that I thought that Naoe might have raped Minako before he put Kagetora into her body (but it's really hard to tell.) But anyway, I love this story and can't wait until you update again!
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on November 28, 2005
    This was just amazing! The first part was funny - the thing about the little white line in the elevator. I wonder what Naoe was thinking about, though. All of the "accidental" flirting was great! I'm glad Naoe laughed and showed Takaya how cute he is - and I'm really glad that Takaya decided to *actually* flirt with him. But now he's starting to panic. Poor kid. Anyway, sorry for the randomness and I can't wait to read more, so update whenever you can! I've been studying for my finals, but I take time to read this fic 'cause it rocks!
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  • From ANON - cinque on November 28, 2005
    I realy like this story. I hope you are not stoping somewhere in the midle. I realy want to know how it ends.
    And I can tell you germans look nothing like Naoe (sadly) but if you find a one like him tell me
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  • From Dvana on November 26, 2005
    A good start here. ^^ It's nice to see some more fanfiction for this series out there... so many things are unresolved! You asked for comments... I for one would like to see Takaya and Naoe work out whatever's between them, for better or worse, like adults instead of jealous, lonely children... but that may be too much to ask of any fic, lol. You may use the "dreamscape" as an avenue for that resolution... and some yummy smut. ^^ Of course, I'm pretty much making this up as I type, so feel free to ignore me. Otherwise... it's well written (grats!) and you've got a good feel for the characters. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - hisoka Kurosaki on November 26, 2005
    OMG! i'm in love. I love how you keep them so in character. I really hope you do more with this.
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  • From ANON - ZZ on November 26, 2005
    Nice story. Great characterization! I really love how we can look into Takaya's thoughts and perspective.
    Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on November 26, 2005
    You know, I have the same problem - too much plot, not enough characterization. I wind up jumping straight into the story with no warning and going way too fast, not even bothering to describe what people look like or anything. But there's nothing wrong with this story - you're doing very well! I really like this and want to see where you'll go with it. I loved the way you wrote about Takaya's thoughts on Naoe's clothes and politeness. He really is a spolied little brat sometimes...well always. Please keep going - I can't wait to see what else will happen!
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on November 24, 2005
    This is good - keep going, please! Umm ... I don't know where you should go with it either, but I know that I don't want you to stop, if that helps ... I guess it doesn't though, huh?
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