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By : Kousuke
  • From ANON - Kumachan on November 24, 2006
    .....................O.O I think i'm in love.... with your story(haha gotcha).
    Which means I shall cry and be sad if you abandon it. It is really awesome, though I do have a bit of constructive criticism(or as constructive as I get).
    1) I'd hate to have to trust those two horny little fuckers to save me >< they forgot about poor little Rio to have sex! It was a nice sex scene but still... such heartless people.
    2) Don't lose to the fangirls!!! Don't let them make you force their relationship(besides, it's so much more fun to torture them, isn't it?)! It's not blaringly obvious, but You should write it in your way and not care what they want. If you let them change it, it won't be as good. because, let's just face it: most other people's opinions suck, don't they?
    Anyway my point is you're a great writer and should continue! You have an ability that shouldn't be wasted! I think I'm gonna go read your other stories (that is if I've seen the show they're related to >_>) so don't let me down. ^^
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  • From ANON - jerry gonsalez on October 04, 2006
    will eyes and ayomu be able to save rio or will kanone kill ayomu and will there be lemon please review and update thank you.
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  • From MystikIvanow on February 02, 2006
    This is really something. Finally they kissed...properly!! LOL I'll be waiting for the next update and for the big question that will be solved: who's gonna be on top? XDDD
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  • From ANON - KamuiShinken on February 02, 2006
    Hey there!!! Great chapter!! Ayumu's plan seems a little simple and old fashioned but I think it could work. Ayumu was right though, how could somebody else know about Rio and Eyes being friends? Unless there's someone they know behind all this...Kanone perhaps??...hard to say, but who knows with that creepy mind of his??? Update soon ok?? and more AyumuxEyes plz!!!! Bye!
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  • From ANON - BWinner(Not signed in) on January 31, 2006
    Okay, you managed to catch my attention... Now will you continue, or will this wind up like a crap load of other stories on here? Because seriously, leaving it there, was NOT nice. I'll be waiting...
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  • From ANON - CeTe on January 24, 2006
    Wow it's been this long since I reviewed? Heh, sorry about that. Poor Kanone, poor completely mental phycho Kanone. Eyes and Ayumu.......well lets look at it this way they'll die together. Lol, for real though, yay they're together hold up Ayumu won the fight for dominance?! Eyes lost to that(shuts up before she says something smart). Anyway what is his plan? Poor Rio I hope she's okay.
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  • From ANON - KamuiShinken on January 18, 2006
    continue please!!! i love EyesxAyumu! What's gonna happen to Rio?? Is Kanone going to do something to Ayumu or Eyes?? Plz update!
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  • From Cilla on January 05, 2006
    hehehe haha Eyes your hooked
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  • From ANON - CeTe on January 02, 2006
    Aw crap! Aw hell! Aw shit! Aw, wait a minute how the hell did he end up at Ayumu's apartment?! Kanone just likes to show up out of no where doesn't he? Ayumu's dead, I don't even need the rest of the story. He's just dead on the ground bleeding cause Kanone's going to beat him till he can't breath, and Eyes.....he lived a good life.
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  • From ANON - Mystik on December 28, 2005
    Ahnn, Ayumu is so cute when angry! LOL i wonder what Eyes has to do to convince him, uh? ^.~

    I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Ja!!
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  • From ANON - Priscilla on December 22, 2005
    Does Ayumu ever play the piano at any time in the Series?
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  • From MystikIvanow on December 21, 2005
    This is so cute! But I must admit that I don't really fancy about Kanone!!! Let's get Eyes and Ayumu together, people!!! LOL

    I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Ja ne!

    PS: sorry fo the lousy english, Brazilian here o/
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  • From ANON - CeTe on December 18, 2005
    Okay Kouske was sooo lucky Eyes was there to hold Kanone back. Oh yeah Ayumu gonna jump when Eyes asks him, but Kanone might have just a few comments on that(emphasis on few, meaning he's not going to like it at all most likely).
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  • From ANON - otaku11 on December 18, 2005
    THIS STORY IS AWSOME!!!! CANT WAIT T"LL EYESxAYUMU!!! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - CeTe on December 16, 2005
    Yeah, you got me in the beginning with the whole Kousuke thing. Yay, Kanone here let all the chaos comense. Lol, Kousuke was so wrong for what he did.
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