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Reviews for The Lost Cadre

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Ryn on December 28, 2013
    I beg you to write more of this. Its been sooooo long a wait for an update. Please continue this.
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  • From monochrome on August 11, 2011
    Oh, phooey! It's over already? D: Damn... Ah, well. As usual, your writing had me so engrossed I stayed up most of the night reading this. You really know how to spin a tale! And Lordy, do I love your original characters! Zesiro's a total doll XD Granted, a psychotic, sex-crazed, thoroughly dangerous doll, but nonetheless... He just pushes all the right crazy-buttons, I guess :D

    Man, I'd give my left leg to read more of this story, but I doubt you'd appreciate a severed limb so instead I'm gonna try and bribe you with homemade espresso-chocolate cupcakes... Pretty please, write some more of this if you get a chance? :3
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  • From LuvLotsaYaoi on April 06, 2010
    OH MY! I think that there is another threesome in the near future, at least a potential one between Akando, Jolen & Katze. I think this living situation is definitely getting interesting. I have 1 question though, is Ejnar a Blondie or Cadre reject? I, for the life of me can't figure out why he has such a grudge against the AI or the Cadre. He certainly sounds like he could be a Blondie off his rocker. I totally love Jolen, he has me on the laugh box replacement list because I have worn my first one out [rolling on the floor laughing in pain]. Akando really needs to stop before he gets him and the other 3 Cadre shocked to death or at the very least loose a limb. (^.^)

    Mingan & Sevilen, wow, I really would love to see the scene the Mingan has already decided on having. The 1 thing I love more than ANK & its spin offs is ROLE PLAY GAMES. {*.*}

    Raoul & Zesiro, I missed them in this chapter, they give a serious case of nose bleeds ;) but I really don't mind. Is there another tryst in the working for Hakhan and those two sex-crazed lovers? XD

    Iason & Riki, I can see that they will be in the story more already, but will the have a lovers endeavor with Mingan & Sevilen? I hope so I can see that getting VERY interesting. (fanning myself from the sudden heat I just felt)O_o

    Anyway THANK YOU for continuing the story. I didn't think you would because of how long ago the last chapter was published, although I DID bookmark your story in the chance that you may pick up where you left off. I look forward to the next chapter. {*x*}
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  • From KotoriSensei on April 04, 2010
    Hey! Miracle! A new chapter...since...i got no idea. Just happy to see you back with another one, because as I'm already said before, your fic is great.
    I though the dancing part was going to be a little longer, but no matter what it was hilarious!!! Poor Akando, just as Jolen planed in the previous chapter: see but no touching. Jijijijiji.
    Is nice to see Katze here, i kind of miss him in your fic, but apparently you are going to use all the regular characters besides the new ones. At other hand...Sevilen is so cute! Asking with his puppy eyes for Riki to visit him or him visiting Riki. He just sound like a kid asking his mother to bring his friends over...>///< Of course, the feelings of Mingan for him are everything but that of a mother...-_-'''
    Well, hope to read you soon.
    PD: when is jolen let akando touch besides see? jujujuju

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  • From LuvLotsaYaoi on March 26, 2010
    I know that you haven't written on this story for a while and I don't even know if you'll get this review, but I just have to say how much I loved your story. I also know that you have a ton of other stories posted, and doubt that you'll consider completing this 1.

    Anyway onto the review. This story is totally awesome. I can't tell you how hilarious it is to see Sevilen battling with his over active sex drive. Although it had some really really really really good sex scenes nothing was as good as Seeing Akando have his ass handed to him and Mingan getting shell shocked just because he was linked as well. As a total AnK fan, I truly love the story revolving around people other than Riki, Iason, Guy, Katze, & Raoul. Its even better to see tight ass Raoul involved in endless sex and ROUGH sex at that, and the best part of it all he's the freaking' UKE (the bottom, the M in the S&M team (nose bleeds by envisioning Zesiro fucking Raoul into submission).

    I am begging you to continue this story, I am anxious to see how Akando reacts to Jolen dressed all sexy like & if Sevilen will tell Mingan he wants a spanking ("vibrating in my seat with excess energy" in your words with a little twist Tee Hee). I look forward to reading your other works.
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  • From Hestia on July 31, 2009
    Just a note to say I love this--and love rereading it!

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  • From kuroineko on July 21, 2009
    Your story is reallly brilliant.I hope you didn't abandon it, it's been a wile since the last update and I would be really devastated if you do so. Pleeeeaaaase go on!
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  • From Hestia on May 09, 2009
    OMG!!! Two new chapters--yes, it's been a long time since I checked for updates! Wow! So awesome! I love Jolen's scales! And his bitchin' mom! It's so cool that Sev. finding out about his dad. The transport thing was weird and confusing--why use a space ship then? Or was the first female the teleporter? Hmmmm . . .

    Interesting elevator sex and very cute about Raol's furninture being so concerned.
    I do love this story!

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  • From jewel2656 on April 28, 2009
    Oh how wonderful to see your story posted here on AFF, I used to read it on Kiramenu's website until everything went into chaos when Kira decided to take a different path with her writing. I was so sad thinking that I lost my chance to continue reading The Lost Cadre. It had been so long that I re-read it again. I love your characters they are too cute for words. Poor Raoul has no idea what he got himself into, but at least he is enjoying himself. I love Jolen he is going to drive Akando crazy, and yes in spite of Akando being full of himself it won’t hurt for him to learn a little humility, but he is cute in his own stubborn way. I hope Jolen puts him through his paces before he allows him to come near him (Hehe). Mingan such a wonderful character, I hope he will like living on Sevilen’s planet because that is the only place they can love and be themselves, can’t wait to see what happens next with them. Zesiro what a cool character, I love, love him and his big strong wild sexy swishing tail kind of hunk of hunk. Hakhan is so sweet and gentle I would love for Raoul to see him in a different light, the poor thing deserves to be treated well and he should be loved. So glad to see that you are still writing this story and I so look forward to reading more, thanks so much for being in AFF and for your wonderful story.
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  • From KotoriSensei on April 22, 2009
    Hey it's really good this fic. I've read until chapter 2 so far...keep going!!!
    Both characters are really sexy!!!
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  • From Sweetsong22 on April 15, 2009
    Well, it's good to know that you're still alive and that you haven't abandoned this story. =) It's been months since I first read it but this last chapter reminded me of exactly what I love about it. Zesiro, I missed seeing him in action, hehe. And I have to admit that I'm anxious to see the whole Jolen/Akando bit played out. Don't wait another 6 months for an update please. =)
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  • From flameofthenight on March 22, 2009
    OMG AN UPDATE! YEAY! Dances. I keep thinking you might have abandoned it the updates take. Anyway update again soon. Cause this story rocks.
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  • From ethereal on March 16, 2009
    I can't beleive you updated! I was really starting to give up on this story but I love it so much and I just had to keep checking back. Thank you so much for continueing it. I loved the scene with Jupiter, and I can't wait to see where you take it next.
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  • From SirynsMagick on March 13, 2009
    Akando is an absolute ass who can't take no for an answer... Jolen and Zesiro are hilarious though. When Zesiro told Jolen that his mom wanted pictures I could almost see Jolen pale in fright starring wide eyed at Zesiro. I am also willing to bet that Jolen's scales are really pretty. (as you can tell I have way to much time to imagine stuff). I can't wait to see more fights between Jolen and Akando and maybe some more fights between Akando ans Zesiro. Also, the Awh'anise are freaking awesome. You should seriously consider doing an original(yaoi) fic just on their race and culture. I'd love to read that. Please update soon!!! Pretty please!! I'll bake cookies!!

    Ganbatte!!

    Ryn
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  • From Sweetsong22 on October 12, 2008
    This is the first story in a long time that had me cackling in delight as I read it, anxious to turn the page to see what would happen next. Zesiro has got to be one of the best characters I've ever had the pleasure of reading about in a long time. I love everything about him, his personality, his appearance (which reminds me of a redheaded Grimmjow in pantera form btw =p)

    It's not just the beautiful original characters you've created, the story itself has so much merit, it's not just sex (though the sex is quite brilliant) but there's a deep underlying plot that makes me can't wait to see how it all turns out. Don't put this one on the back burner, you've got a real winner here.
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