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Reviews for Some Things

By : GreyEyez
  • From Rezalda on May 10, 2008
    I thought this was really good. I read another fic about Kira raping Sara, but I think this is a more realistic portrayal of how things would happen if Kira and Sara were together. Kira cares about Setsuna, and Sara as well, so I thought this was an excellent oneshot.
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  • From Yvy on January 12, 2008
    Phew...poor Kira~~ very well done!
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  • From ANON - ree on November 09, 2006
    really good! hope you're other stories are as good as this one was!
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  • From ANON - adorkablebanana on October 07, 2006
    This is so beatifully written, the language and flow of your style is refreshing to look at. I'm happy to see a Kira/Sara fic so many kudos for you.
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on September 03, 2006
    the first person shit has got to go, its more like a poem then a story. Come on, use third person or something, this is just horrible. What do I know though? I've never written a story, I just read them. I just dont like this one.
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  • From ANON - cap'n crunch on July 03, 2006
    What can I say? You've got talent.

    Your style and language is great. I look up to your writing.
    I'm struggling really, because I don't know what else to say, but
    you captured the situation really well.

    Because... of course everything is better when it's forbidden.

    Right?

    xKit
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  • From ANON - Crystalwren on June 26, 2006
    I love it. Very intense.
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  • From on January 11, 2006
    You know it's rare for me to find a good Kira/Sara fic and this one just made the day for me. I enjoyed the realism it gave off without being out of character. I liked this very much. Thanks.
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