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Reviews for Written Up

By : quamp
  • From quamp on February 04, 2006
    Thank you for your kind words. While it's true Kintaro would not really fall asleep on the job, I really couldn't figure out any other way to get him kicked out of the place.
    I've met the American voice actor for Kintaro a few times, Doug Smith, at anime conventions in Texas. He's also a very good manga artist too. When writing the story, I could hear Kintaro's voice saying his words in my head.
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  • From NarsheDelvar on February 01, 2006
    Oh...that ending was fucked up...You naughty little boy/girl/whateverthehellyouare. You don't mess with Kentaro like that. =( He is just too kewl for it to just end like that.

    Alright. I really liked the set-up and the setting. Kentaro was most definitely in character the whole time. Everytime he spoke, i could imagine his voice saying just that, screaming out what he normally does in the manner that he does. The only thing I could not see him do is fall asleep on the job. He is too hard of a worker to do something like that. xD But you did really well with him.

    The woman was really nice, in his dreams. xD

    I just wish it was longer than what you had written there. That had the potential to go even farther than that, like begging him for the girl to rethink her actions and all that jazz.

    Overall, it was good and I enjoyed reading it. =3 I guess I think highly of Kentaro and didn't want something like that to happen to him. He is a really kewl character. ^__^

    Ja ne!

    -Narshe Delvar-
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