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Reviews for Ardent

By : Voluptas
  • From ANON - :-> on August 09, 2006
    I really like your story but I wished you had continued with the last szene of chapter 3! I'm curious about what'll happen next (I mean, I can imagine what'll happen next, but it's better reading it instead of thinking about it :->). So plaeees update soon!
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  • From ANON - julian on August 01, 2006
    awsome! update, update, update, updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!
    plz, plz, plz... (bouncing off the walls)PLZ(collapses from exostion)zzzzzzz
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  • From ANON - MissMurder111 on July 27, 2006
    Sweet! i like it! please update soon!
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  • From PoisonedWine on July 20, 2006
    "There was a knock and the door opened. Muraki entered, dressed entirely in silver white."

    Hahaha. The first thing I thought when I read this was, "Muraki is the bride!"

    Interesting story. Keep it up ^^

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  • From ANON - eternal on July 19, 2006
    Thanks for the update ^-^ This chapter is quite short BUT nice one btw when will our hero come and save the cute little Hisoka KYAAA Sorry looks like i'm eager to read the next chappie! Thanks
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  • From ANON - Jeri on July 14, 2006
    I wanna read more!!!! Love it!!!
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  • From ANON - eternal on July 02, 2006
    This is great story. Attracted by the summary and decided to take a shot. You made a great opening chapter there. LOVES it. Since i'm not a writer so can't give you much an advice to it but I really likes the opening chapter. I'm really looking forward to continue this story and PLEASE CONTINUE THIS TIL THE END! I'll wait for you next chap! ^-^
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  • From ANON - eternal on July 02, 2006
    This is great story. Attracted by the summary and decided to take a shot. You made a great opening chapter there. LOVES it. Since i'm not a writer so can't give you much an advice to it but I really likes the opening chapter. I'm really looking forward to continue this story adn PLEASE DON'T IT! I'll wait for you next chap! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2006
    I love it! I love it! I wanna read more!!
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  • From ANON - DreamPrincess on July 02, 2006
    Oh, I loved it...And don't worry, I'm the sameway as you...I like him being 15....Add more....
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