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Reviews for A Warm Feeling

By : hungrypankake
  • From Hentaiwriter18 on May 24, 2008
    I hope to see the end of this, I read this story a while back, and still no ending chapter...

    Hope to see the end!!
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  • From thebigW on April 12, 2007
    Well, the way it's formatted, it's like this stream of consciousness erupted from your muse, and just kept going and going... That can be a bit hard to follow in one large helping.

    I thought Kaorin would fight harder for Sakaki, once she saw that one display some conflicted emotions after Sakaki broke the bad news to her.

    You also could have used Osaka a bit better, having her explain in her unique fashion the reason she spilled the beans. That would make her much more than the tattler she comes off looking like.

    All that having been said, this was very creative, overall a very nice fanfic.

    Please write more.

    W.
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  • From hungrypankake on January 26, 2007
    Why thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2007
    Thankyou for the lovely lemons in this story. I really enjoyed reading them, you write some good stuff. Thankyou for accepting my challenge and I reward you.

    This is wonderful! ^_^
    *grins*
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  • From ANON - Yami nefertira on December 03, 2006
    This is a nice story, and thankyou for accepting my challenge as well.
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  • From hungrypankake on October 30, 2006
    Why thank you very much!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2006
    This is an awesomre fanfic! Very hot and very cute too! Well done!
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  • From ANON - -B- on September 11, 2006
    This is a really cool story! I love that Kagura and Sakaki are together and that thing with Kaorin was cool too. Speaking of Kaorin maybe have her get together with Chihiro because they are supposed to be like best friends (I think)! But anyway I really like this story and hope you kee it going!
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  • From ANON - thehentaiisles on August 03, 2006
    *Reviewing Part 2*

    THAT'S more like it! Maybe it was a lack of other characters, but this one feels a little more in the spirit, and it was a little easier to follow the motives and stuff, but getting past all that, the second part is just as well-written as the first. (Of course, I'm a fan of putting spaces between paragraphs, but that's only because I do it in my stuff, and I'm a horrible stickler. :P)

    Good work! Perhaps you might be interested in writing a few of the Omission shorts from my own story? (Sorry about that, by the way. I didn't know adding a chapter would put it back on top of the listing...)
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  • From hungrypankake on August 01, 2006
    Yeah, wasn't exactly revolutionary, and I tried to add how they spoke to give it more of an Azumanga feeling. I might add another chapter to it, I'll have to see how I feel about it. Maybe Kaorin will come into all of this?? *hint at foreshadowing....NOW*
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  • From TheHentaiIsles on August 01, 2006
    Agreed. Unfortunately, one doesn't see many Kagura/Sakaki stories. Quite refreshing!

    I'd have to say though that as a story it wasn't exactly revolutionary. Not much was taken from the original material to make one buy why what happened happened, though I have to say the spelling/punctuation was above par.

    Overall, it felt like the names could have been changed without affecting the story. Not really Azumangaish enough, but that might just be my opinion. But it WAS a decent yuri fic.

    "Yay!" *Thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Sakaki x Kagura on August 01, 2006
    Finally! A Sakaki X Kagura Story! and a very well written one too!
    It was so sweet and oh so innocent. Well Done!
    I do wonder why Yomi wanted to asked Sakaki to come over her house too? In any case you should update! I wonder what their friends will say about their relationship...
    Great Work!
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