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Reviews for A Different Beginning

By : Takeda
  • From SunsetGlory on January 22, 2007
    sry, but it seems like this story is better suited in fanfiction.net not ADULTfanfiction.net.
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  • From ANON - E.T. on January 06, 2007
    Okay, so I know it's been a long time since you put up a chapter, but could you please update ADB? I really like it so far, and after watching SA again today I really needed to read some fanfiction, and ADB was the most interesting. Okay, this is getting a bi too long now :P so I'll leave it on a positive note: update soon cause I love this fic!!
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  • From ANON - SweetMelancholy on December 21, 2006
    i like where this story is going. is this the first time chihiro is going to the spirit world? or is it a continuation of the real movie? it would be better if you did not keep continuing to base it completely on the original movie. maybe continue basing it on the movie for awhile before using your own storyline. making chihiro and haku both teenagers has given you an advantage. being teenagers, both of them would have desires and urges. which you could describe and create incidents between the both of them. please do not make haku a extremely old spirit which has an appearance of a teenager a few years older than chihiro like many spirited away fanfictions in ff.net, its just wierd and disturbing that a very old person is in love with a teenager. please update soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - SweetMelancholy on December 21, 2006
    i really like where this story is going. how old are chihiro and haku by the way? i may have missed out that detail in the story. do continue your story. it would be a waste if you stopped writing this story. please update soon! XD
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  • From ANON - Rinny on December 05, 2006
    Wow, really good story! Please update soon, its been a while i see, so i hope you will still continue this story, id really love it!!!

    Hope to read more soon bye bye!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2006
    k
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  • From ANON - johnsmith on October 28, 2006
    Uh, not sure but it just seems like you're writing out the movie and adding in stuff as if she were living now.

    How is it a different beginning?
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  • From ANON - ffaddict on October 01, 2006
    I need another chapter.... O.o really good! though a bit too much like the movie, and going kinda slow, but otherwise really good :)
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  • From ANON - ffaddict on October 01, 2006
    wiiiee! finally a good spirited away fic! :D I hope your updates will be often, coz this story will be my new bible. *bows*
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  • From ANON - Eva on September 02, 2006
    Woot Woot!!
    Love it!
    Keep up the good work and I can't wait for an update!
    ~Eva
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  • From whispirahangel on August 22, 2006
    First of all, you have a potentially good story going here, however, I feel it's following too much with the Movie. I don't mean to be rude, but this is fanfiction, spice it up a little, like the comments you have Chihiro making, make more full scenes like that. don't just follow the original movie because it gets boring after awhile. Also, if this is in the future why doesn't Chihiro and Haku (or anyone for that matter) remember any of this, or does she lose her memory from before? Explain that to me please! OTher than that, keep it up. I would like to know how this is going to turn out.
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  • From ANON - meliny on August 19, 2006
    liked it so far. . . luved the movie so that explains y i like this story. . . cant wait for more hope u update soon
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  • From ANON - Abigail on August 16, 2006
    Finish it please
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  • From ANON - Iris on August 16, 2006
    Love the story and would definitely like to see it continued. You have great writing style. Oh, and just as a note, I think perhaps that you meant to use the word "ferry" instead of "faerie" in the second chapter. I'd love to see more of this. :)
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