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Reviews for You Want it Off?

By : Innerchild
  • From ANON - Non Serviam on May 08, 2015
    If I ask reaaaaally nicely.... Will you post the final part?
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  • From Asylus on November 03, 2007
    Then I shall make you smile!
    Loving the story, dearest.
    I can barely contain my excitement in waiting for the last installment.
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 01, 2007
    Omg i love this story! "Sorry about that i just took him off his catnip" Lmao >_< it's genius.
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  • From vampslyr on February 11, 2007
    Chapter 1 is pretty good. It would be known as 'lime' by the way. Rikuo's being pretty magnanimous, but he's thinking of the future and wants sex to leave a good taste in Kudo's mouth, so to speak.

    Chapter 2 has its moments and I always like a good shower scene. I really enjoy the emotion of Rikuo touching Kudo while he's masturbating instead of just watching him. It makes the act more intimate.

    Chapter 3 - Hmm, well the flashback explained what Kudo was doing wearing a dress this time, but nothing in the situation really advanced the plot (this being PWP, the plot would be the relationship). The scene before the flash back with the two scuffling in the store was cute and seems like something they'd do and what happened after with Kakei was very in character for him. Kudo does have trouble expressing what he needs, so points for Rikuo for realizing that and turning it into a bit of eroticism. I'm looking forward to the lemon and would like to see a focus on the sensations involved while making love (especially touch and taste) and the connection they each feel for the other.
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  • From ANON - shadwdryuu on January 09, 2007
    ooooh, plz hurry and add the last chapter it is a good story and i love yaoi, plz, plz, plz,plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LoveRazor on December 05, 2006
    I LOVED IT!!! make the next chapter fast,please?! i will die if i cant find out how nervious and silly it will be
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  • From ANON - Amari-kun on November 30, 2006
    I love this story! Poor tormented Kazahaya. Hope you add the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - silverlook on November 15, 2006
    *content sigh* been a long time since I read a good Legal Drug fic.
    You don't know how happy it made me to see the little "update" sign XD keep writing, and don't worry, it takes a real talent to ruin a sex chappie -_-;;
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 12, 2006
    will this be your first lemon? huh, i didn't realize that. but i'm so surprised to find that you write legal drug! and this one is good. i must say, that shower part was hawt. it actually made me want to stop everything i'm doing and write a naughty pwp. then that led to an ever greater/funnier idea that i'm going to play around with at a later time.

    but i digress. this is awesome. i can't wait for the next part. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Daxemon on November 05, 2006
    I discovered your story on fanfiction.net and then i came here and saw that the fun was still going and i'm glad. i look forward to the rest of this tantilizing fanfic.
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  • From ANON - sexilexi on October 06, 2006
    oh wow! i absolutely loved it! please finish the last part so the two hot lovers can be at rest (in your story that is... clamp why are you so slow!). i found your story very well written! please write more!
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  • From ANON - sleepless on September 26, 2006
    hehehehhee!!!!!love the way you ended^___^so funny and yes i hope you make one more to it!
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  • From ANON - Behold Mad Hatter on September 18, 2006
    I love it~! keep up with the good work >.
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  • From ANON - erisa ken on September 09, 2006
    yeah i think u should do a sequel and i thougth you should hnow i enjoyed reading it alot and will look forward to seeing or rather reading the sequel when or if you have the time to write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - weiss_ceres on August 25, 2006
    Amazing!
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