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Reviews for On The Run

By : JetMykles
  • From ANON - Fan on January 31, 2014
    This is turning out wonderfully!! I wish you'd finish it and I also want to say I'm a huge fan of your published work. Lol sorry for gushing!! Please finish this!
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  • From ausyandy on August 26, 2009
    Damn this is a great story. And that scene with Omi and Ken in chapter 2 is awesome. I've still got a few chapters to read tonight before I go to bed though. And it's 4:00am now. :)
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  • From ANON - me on December 12, 2006
    please update i cant wait for more

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  • From ANON - zetsuai2005 on December 02, 2006
    How refreshing! To see Omi be the more (comparatively) experienced of the two... Ken was more than willing to take the lead, but cared enough about Omi to defer to his guidance. I like this idea of having them split at the first sign of danger. Gives each couple the privacy to work on other things just as important as, though secondary to, survival. And hopefully increases the odds of them surviving. I'm already addicted to seeing how this plays out.
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  • From ANON - Bards Apprentice on November 28, 2006
    lol. ^_^
    i love it when the "clean" shower sex comes before the "dirty" bed sex. XD
    they'll have to get back in the shower when they wake up! ^_^
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  • From Blythe on November 27, 2006
    JET!!! Sorry for falling so far behind with reading and reviewing! RL is being wonky again! I'm glad that you're still working on this story and I'm really enjoying it so far! An WOOHOO for Yohji being able "overcome objections" with Aya!!! I'm thoroughly enamored of the smut, but I am looking forward to knowing what's going on with the kitten-nappers. Who are they? What do they want (besides our boys!)? I'm looking forward to the next update!! ~Blythe
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  • From ANON - Bards Apprentice on November 21, 2006
    i love this story sooo much! the way u worked up to it in the first story was wonderful -funny & sweet & seductive & HOT!
    & now it's getting angsty & i just about can't stand it! XD

    post more soon!
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on November 11, 2006
    Delicious, action, suspense, hot sex and wonderful characterizations. I hope for more soon -- I'm anxious for clues as to who is trying to capture the kittens.
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  • From ANON - Miss Macabre nsi on November 11, 2006
    OMG. MORE!!! Please? Pretty please?!
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  • From ANON - draelynn on October 04, 2006
    I am completely enthralled with your tight, compact storytelling. The economy of words yet still evoking vivid images and a full range of emotions. *tell me dear... do I look good in this shade of green?* I do have a question though... from Chap 1 to 4 there is quite the obvious time shift... do we ever get to see the 'first time' between Aya and Yohji? After the sweet build up in Chap 1, I kinda REALLY want it... Wow. That sounded like begging. In this context, I'm guessing that's a good thing. And I just don't do Ken x Omi but you made it soooo bareable! Just ask Sarge.. that's glowing praise! Thanks for the enjoyable read!
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  • From ANON - Goddess of Magick on September 24, 2006
    Ooh, the suspense is killing me! You've done a great job, write more please!

    ~*~ Maia
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  • From ANON - KD Sarge on September 13, 2006
    *melts* thanks. I needed that.
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  • From ANON - KD Sarge on September 12, 2006
    chapter two--oh damn you're good. Emotion everywhere, not overdone...I should go back and read how you did that.
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  • From ANON - KD Sarge on September 12, 2006
    omg, did you really just make me like a Ken/Omi chapter? Yeah, I think you did. (last time doesn't count, that chapter had one HOT A/Y lemon in it too...) Wowza! Great beginning, Jet!
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  • From Blythe on September 07, 2006
    Couldn't go to sleep! Had to finish! And, boy! Am I ever glad I did!! *fans herself* Nothing like hot, frantic lovin' to...relax you? Anyway, the pacing is very fast, giving the reader the urgency the boys must be feeling. I'm anxious for the next chapter! (Here's hoping you update faster than I do! *w*)
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