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Reviews for FAKE First Year Together: A New Day (May)

By : BrittColumbia
  • From phoenix682 on October 11, 2009
    Just wanted to say thank you for this amazing story! I just started to read it today and I can hardly bring myself to take a break. The details about the characters in this story are so complete. I just love the emotion between everyone. The plot is not just along for the ride and and the sex is hot,hot,hot and not just slam, bam, thank you mister but shows caring and tenderness. Just wanted to share a little feedback in thanks.
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  • From catti on March 28, 2009
    Okay...finally just sat down over the last few days and read this story..man really this is a long ass story and is quite good..I love the whole Ryo/Dee love story...and I can understand Ryo's reluctance to come "out of the closet" and discovering a new sexual life style...I like the whole story line with Abernathy and Drake and JJ (I know you have a separate story about those two). Like before, this is quite a story and am enjoying it but it is really long!!! I was wondering how many more chapters this story was going to be and also are you thinking about a pre sequel...I searched and all I could find was stories after the fact..You are an amazing author and I was wondering if you were thinking about writing a one shot or multi-chapter about Ryo finally submitting to Dee's charms...catti
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  • From MarieA on August 24, 2008
    Ahhhhh!!!! I love this story! I went to your live journal and read ch. 39 i'm hooked!!! I can noy wait till Ch. 40!!! ^__^ Please keep writing because I plan to keep reading.
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  • From MarieA on August 11, 2008
    I love this story so much!!!! I just stopped so I could tell you how much I love it! Thank you for taking the time to write it! ^_^
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  • From Capitalist on April 01, 2008
    Peacewish here, you know me through Swordy. You're friended on LJ and I've been watching you announce your updates to this story for a while, but I just got so burned by the whole Fake fandom drama that I was timid about getting back into it, and figured I'd wait until sometime that I was more emotionally ready. Well, I am, and I read it, all 33 chapters in the space of two days, and I enjoyed every minute of it. You have a subtle, complex crime plot going here, which is a lot more than most Fakefic writers could ever manage, and I salute you for that. I also respect your willingness to research some of the boring facts to back up your story, which can't have been easy considering this isn't even set in your own native country. To be perfectly honest, I think you've put more work into factchecking than Sanami Matoh herself. Moreover, your narrative style is easy and readable, sufficiently scrubbed of spelling/grammar errors, also a rarity in the Fake fandom. Leave us not forget that the story actually centers on D/R, when most of the fandom seems to think Drake/JJ is the only couple worth discussing. I'm engrossed in the story and eagerly await installments.
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  • From KatzeRaoul on March 30, 2008
    "Now you've done it," he muttered to himself. His penis gave an answering twitch. "Behave yourself," he said sternly to it. GODS THAT WAS SOOOO FUCK'N FUNNY SHIT RYO TALK'N TO HIS COCK, PRICELESS!!!!


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  • From catti on March 15, 2008
    WOW..this is like a never ending story...
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  • From KatzeRaoul on March 14, 2008
    I am soooooooooo happy that this was updated!!!!!!!!!! I was even more happy to see that, Dee kicked that BASTARDS ASS, they way he treated Carol was uncalled for. Now, I just hope Dee is ok, along with Carol and Bikky.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 22, 2008
    Nice Story and I have to know what kind of trouble Dee will be walking into!
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  • From yume1122 on December 01, 2007
    You're awesome!! ^_^
    Keep it coming please!
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  • From catti on November 26, 2007
    My God...how much longer can this go on.....
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  • From Kuromei on September 02, 2007
    This is a really good fic, but I can't get to chapters 7,16 and 18 for some reason. They have nothing but the disclaimer! I didn't mind with 7, but the other two had hot smut and important story elements in that order! DX It made me sad, not being able to read more of your wonderful fanfic. TT_TT

    Aside from that, keep up the great work! =D
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  • From RyoToshiba69 on August 03, 2007
    Love your story. ^_^ I hope Abernathy(sp?) gets his ass fried. *grins* Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next post.
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  • From Hosama on July 28, 2007
    Ah! I started reading this story yesterday. I've been wanting to leave you a nice review. I have to say that I love reading this story. Your characterization is just bloody perfect. I can almost imagine the manga being drawn around your story! It's funny and light-hearted at some points, which is part of what I love so much about the series. Your sex scenes are fabulous, well-described and full of passion and all that jazz just like they should be. I also like this plot you have going on and the underlying themes of your story. It's very rich. It's almost like reading a FAKE novel, which makes me overjoyed. I think the usual plot lines of the manga are usually more dangerous and violent, but I'm interested in the missing boy thing you have going. I still haven't finished this story and I hope to review again once or more before I'm done. Thank you for this story! It's brilliant. ;D
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  • From nejinee on May 22, 2007
    I have to say this is a great great story. Fantastic plotline and I love that you have the Dee/Ryo thing in character. You write very well and in a pleasing way. The hot chapters were done well too. Sometimes people overdo it with these two but you managed to make me believe. Wonderful work. Keep it up. :)
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