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Reviews for Hot Spring Antics

By : AzuRandomer
  • From quamp on August 28, 2007
    I have to agree that Sakaki was a bit OOC. Yomi was a little as well, IMO. However, this being PWP, we can overlook it. I would have given more of a description of how much they liked it though.
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  • From jenafrost on July 10, 2007
    I always like Yomi/Sakaki fics. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Noname on October 14, 2006
    Okay, bad news first. Sakaki was OOC in this fic. Not HORRIBLY OOC, but it was noticeable. She was far more outspoken then she ever appears in the series, and she just generally did not sound like herself. Now, I think what she told Yomi was IC, but the way she said it was far too strong for her. Sounded a lot more like Kagura. Also, it seemed like you were rushing things a bit. No need to charge headlong into the sex. Buildup is always good.

    Now the good news! Everyone else was IC, the sex was hot, and the general plotline was pretty believable (Kaorin's gonna throw a fit though). Also, Tomo on the roof was hilarious. I hope to see more from you.
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  • From Bishonen on October 13, 2006
    Wow that was really good never really thought of those two as a couple but it was great and when I did my azu chapter I thought about putting Osaka in and after reading this I kinda of wish I had

    With love Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - thehentaiisles on October 08, 2006
    Sweet lord, I have no idea what caused it... maybe AMV Hell 3: The Motion Picture and its slew of Azumanga Daioh references, but compared to the ghost town this section used to be, there's been all kinds of Azumanga submissions.

    But the best part is, it's actually GOOD!

    Who wouldn't love the two curviest members of the Azumanga-Force playing around in any environment, let alone the Hot Springs (best place for sex EVAR, from an aesthetic standpoint). Being a stickler for spelling and punctuation, I'm glad to see it was preserved here.

    Maybe the transition to "Yomi, open your eyes! You're hawt!" to "Let's have smexxorz" was a tad abrupt, but that's my only real complaint.

    Good work, but I'd suggest writing a new Azumanga story rather than a sequel to this one. Or rewrite this one, flesh it out, and THEN add a sequel... if you planned to keep writing at all, which wouldn't be a bad thing.
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