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By : enslavementthesis
  • From Sinful on April 25, 2007
    WOW lol very discriptive....but I'd have bit it off....he could fuckin grow it back but I would have bit that shit off. Darlin i love ur story....i think u even had it on FF ......i loved it there, i love it here and any where else you decide to post but I do hope at some point Seras will grow some balls....I hope she learned sumthing from that encounter with Alucard
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  • From ZombieDuke on April 15, 2007
    *grins slowly* This story makes me happy.
    A M/s Alucard/Seras story makes me very, VERY happy XD
    I can understand the lack of updates, I haven't updated in, uh, well, quite a while myself^_^;
    Anyway, keep up the excellent writing, the wonderful Master!Alucard and the fiesty!Seras, I have a good feeling about this plot!
    Plus, thank you for getting Sera's to adopt the cat. Pretty much all of my felines suffered the same fate before I got my greedy hands on them(I've gotten them from the back of highschools, abondened on beaches, in boxes on the side of the road, garbage dumps) and now they're all fat, sleep the day away and are in their 'golden' years^_^
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  • From candycrys on April 10, 2007
    Damn company i wish i could kick their ass for you because i just found this story and i need more. and what the hell is up with kids these day. they all need a good beating and you can't beat them cause you'll end up in jail these day =(
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  • From MistressMizu on March 21, 2007
    This story is awesome. I don't remember the anime much because I'm a bit obsorbed with the manga so I can't really say if Alucard is OOC but SOMETHING, I can't quite pin it, is off. Anyway, it doesn't bother me at all, it's just while reading your author's note in one of the chapters (not the sole author's note) I realized that he sort of was.

    It's pretty hot how Seras gets turned on by him so easily. It's pretty comical, too. You've got a nice style. I didn't notice at first until the 3rd chapter that you forget to put a period when someone's finished talking. XD I'd give you a quote but I'm a little lazy. DX

    I'm sorry you can't update! I hope the computer company gives you a nice new screen. X_x I hope mine never breaks. You've gotta be careful with plasma I guess. I dunno. Ehhh I'm sure it's awkward typing up something like this in a public place. You're brave.
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  • From shadowkeepre on March 12, 2007
    So, I caught a small mistake towards the end:

    Was Seras some kind of substitute for His Mistress? He couldn’t have her, so He tried to have Seras instead? She didn’t understand, what did He want from her? Did he want to humiliate her?

    The "he" in the final sentence was not capitalized.

    I appreciate the use of the "He" and "His" and "Him"'s all capitalized. I think it adds a touch that most of the D/s fics in this genre are lacking, especially the ones written from a sub's perpective.
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  • From flamingangel on March 07, 2007
    Hi again!
    Okay, now that I've finished reading what's written, I would like to say...
    Wow. Tis very hot! I can't wait until the next chapter!
    I noticed that someone had said that Alucard was OOC. I don't notice, but I've also only watched three anime and read one manga (a LONG time ago) so it'd take alot for me to notice any OOC-ness, but I'm still loving how it's written.
    It's almost like he's suddenly decided to make her comfortable with her new situation, by any means possible. It's great!
    Keep writing, and I'm sorry about your moniter... damn compainies taking their time!
    Until we meet again,
    ~*Angel*~
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  • From flamingangel on March 07, 2007
    Hi there! I've only managed to read the first chapter so far, but it's sounding awesome! I can't wait to read some more, but unfortunately, even vampires have to sleep! (Jk, but I do need sleep)
    You did say that you don't mind constructive critisism, which is good, because you'd be getting it anyways (no offence or anything meant here)..
    I find that having no spaces in between the paragraphs makes it a little more difficult to read, especially when trying to scroll down the page. So, my suggestion is if you spaced out the paragraphs more, hit enter twice at the end of each paragraph instead of once, it would make the story look a lot tidyer and make it easier on the reader's eyes.
    I'm sorry that I can't offer more on the way of "I love the story!" at the moment, since I have yet to finish reading what's written, but I can tell you that I am definately looking foreward to reading more once I'm more awake!

    ~*Angel*~
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  • From AletaRois on March 06, 2007
    This is turning out to be a wonderful story. I do hope you continue. :o)
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  • From ANON - lilly on December 22, 2006
    please continue it has been a while since i found a good seras and alucard story. I can not wait to read more. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - CountryWhoDunnit on December 08, 2006
    I loves it!!!!!! That being said... Keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Nahau on December 04, 2006
    This chapter was absolutely awesome!! Even though Alucard is OOC, it fits him for this story. I think if he was normal then it would be difficult. You asked me for examples and explanations, about him being OOC. Alucard always teased Seras, both in the manga and in the anime. He was never cruel or terrorized her like he does in your fic. But like I said, you fic wouldn't be awesome unless Alucard was a little more toward Seras then he usually is.
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  • From ANON - Bakakim on December 04, 2006
    Please oh Please Master Update!?!?
    I loves it...it's like sex in art
    Yes erm...you must update oh great one of greatness...not many good Fics for Hellsing..most of the I/A ...ewww....A/S ALL THE WAY!!
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  • From ANON - Nahau on November 17, 2006
    Your fic is awesome!! I love the way you put detail into it. Although Alucard seems a little OOC, you still made him as mysterious and sexy as he usually is. I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on November 15, 2006
    You know you enjoy a fic, when you come to the end of the posted chapters and realized you forgot that it was going to eventually end, and then you curse the author for ending it... POST MORE YOU JERK!! Great work, hehe
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  • From ANON - victoria on October 20, 2006
    this was very good! please, update soon!!!
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